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Reviewed By: bk On: February 06, 2007 05:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back!!! Thank you for the wonderful chaper. Please don't stay away so long.
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Reviewed By: Angel 608 On: February 06, 2007 05:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 00:14 PST
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Okay, I know Inuyasha has to have a reason for acting like he is, but still...wanna kick his butt for being such a retard! LOL And...uhh....as for the first kiss...hehehehehehheh....well worth the wait, that's for sure. I'm sure we'll find out about what's happened in everyone's past at *some* point...and while the suspense is killing me, the story in the meantime has been worth it! ^_^
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 05, 2007 21:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was trying to think of a compliment worthy of this chapter that would not be too cliche'. None were worthy of it. If I could of given you a rating of more than 10, I would have went for a 100, for you just gave my mass addiction to Kag/Inu fluff, a major overdose, of which I am so thankful for! My favorite parts (outside of the entire chapter) would be: "His voice-It was doing that deep-rough thing again." "Tempting her back into madness." "Passion acknowledged" and "passion concealed." "Like hell you were kissing a f-ing fish!" Lots of originality and lots of feeling. Thanky, thanky, thanky, for the update. I love this story! Cynbad146
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: February 05, 2007 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though the wait was long it was soooo totally worth it...Will be waiting with baited breath for the next installment. Keep up the super awesome job!!!
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Reviewed By: chun-inu On: February 05, 2007 19:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Killer chapter. I can't wait till Inu admits his feelings so they can be together!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 05, 2007 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. That's why I'm such a big fan of yours...you can make such a simple thing like a kiss so...HOTT! And he didn't 'touch her properly' either. *lol* I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next chapter. Glad your back in action as far as writing.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:37 PST
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Oh,that was so very sweet. Well worth the wait. I eagerly wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:10 PST
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oh wow! That was awesome!!! Can't WAIT to see how the next chapter turns out! Nice work on shippos part! I'm assuming the thing where inu heard him in his head was shippos new trick? plz update soon! ~*Ookami Hime Suriya*~
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Title: FINALLY!!!
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start off by saying that I AM SO FREAKING ESTACTIC THAT YOU FINALLY UPDATED ONE OF MY TWO FAVOURITE STORIES!!!!! And now that that is out of my system, the kiss was really good. That cliffhanger you left us with though was just plain cruel, as we HAVE been waiting forever for you to update. I hope that school and everything continues to go well for you so you can add new chapters, as your fanfics are one of my very few reprieves from school and the overbearing stress of life on a whole. I'm really glad that you eventually got up this chapter and hope that your updates will be more frequent now. As I always say, you are an incredible writer, as your words are gripping, passionate and amazingly realistic. I dabble in writing myself, but I'm not even a fraction as good as you. I'm serious, I will sit and review your writing style and gape in awe at how fluently and eloquently you write. I pray that you will continue to get inspired and that you shall never give up on these stories. God bless you and update "Waiting On A Wish" and "Sachi" as soon as you get the chance. Teddy Bear
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Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 16:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite the re-entrance you've made - well worth the wait! Now I have to find a pile of snow to cool off it! Thank you sooo much for the update! And just like a junkie, I'll have a hard time waiting fo the next chapter. But I do know I will be handsomely rewarded!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 15:18 PST
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Ahh it was right! it was soo right! Shippo (and you of course) deserve a round of applause! *clapping* (yes I realize and admit the big dork factor of comment applausing.) That whole "it was a mistake" thing..boo but now that Kagome knows Inuyasha wants to kiss her, will her response be anger, timidness, flirt and seduce, etc.? aahh can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I got the e-mail saying there was a new chapter!!! It was worth the wait, I loved the chapter. I can't wait for the next, hopefully it's not quite so long of a wait. Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Howlingblue07 On: February 05, 2007 13:10 PST
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Yet another great chapter! [although you left me hanging, darn you :-( ] Just update more often next time, or I'm gonna go insane, lol....
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 13:04 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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