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Reviewed By: Fukai Mori On: February 13, 2007 17:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I have to say this was probably my favourite chapter so far. It was extremely well written and worth the wait, but it's so sad. The kissing seen was romatic, but the end was just to utterly heartbreaking. Please update soon, and I'm praying for a happy ending to this story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: fluffyhugger On: February 10, 2007 15:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freeking amazing, i need more! it was well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: SisSar1535 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 09:43 PST
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Yeah for updating! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 02:26 PST
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Okay.. so amazing chapters! I love this story and I am thankful that you are still writing it! This story has so many secrets... I just have to know what happens. And I want to slap Inuyasha... he needs to get a clue about Kagome. That was one intense quiz though. Well done. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 19:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. And she was poking him! That's especially funny to me. I have a scene very similar to that in my fic "Savvy." I could really just see Kagome doing that. The tension is definitely building with this story, and I can't wait to see more.
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Its about time too XD For the update AND the kiss =p I loved it! More action!
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Reviewed By: j On: February 07, 2007 17:34 PST
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YOU'RE BACK!A wonderful chapter, the effort you put in was not wasted. I can't wait to see what else happens.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 10:36 PST
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wow!! that was amazing!! ::insert squeal here:; so damn well written also!! i agree, definetly a line that can not be uncrossed now. so well written fro the first kiss! i'm glad that inu has his head out of his ass knowing now that he wants her. i'm just worried about her revelations, or what is to come on her half. she's starting to get bits back of her past, ne? it seems that way. hmm...so we have Sango now involved, and i'm interested to see if she knows Kagome (or of her). i'm also much more interested in seeing how inu and kags relationship develops (and when that line is pushed further). you writing is amazing, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 06:19 PST
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THANK GOD YOUR ALIVE! That chapter was the best! I can't wait to see what happens next. You've gotta update reeeeaaaaaaaaaalllly soon!
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Title: Found it!
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I wondered where this fic went to! I have a terrible habit of reading something and not remembering the title or author. I love this story. There is so much mystery, so much sexual tension, and the angst isn't overdone. Being the action whore that I am, I am patiently waiting for bullets to fly! Erm, I hope you have some planned. LOL You have such great scenes. I love the one where inu is fixing the pipes and he gets a bit too close to Kagome for his own comfort, the splinter, etc. I keep expecting Sess to show up at any moment. And you did a great job on the kiss. sigh But Inuyasha is an idiot! I just wanted to slap him for Kagome! LOL I do hope that we see another chapter soon. So anxious! I have you in my favorites now, so glad that they are working again. ^_^ Snow
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Title: FREAKING AWESOME
Reviewed By: Rikuinous On: February 06, 2007 15:51 PST
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THAT KISS Scene was one the best I've ever read, you should seriously get an award for it! please I can barley contain myself until I read the next chappy!!! -RK
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Title: OMG! Update. NOW! Please?
Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:22 PST
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I'm sitting here in my computer chair leaning closer and closer to the screen, thinking, "What next? WHAT NEXT!" Guess I will just have to wait like the rest of these suckers hanging off your every word. Damnnit!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 13:48 PST
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OMFG! That kiss in and of itself was like a full blown lemon. Holy F-ck. Very well done m'dear. I squeeled when I got a message that you had posted. Your chapters are always worth the wait and this one was particularly gratifying. At this point if I were Kagome, I'd be so fucking frustrated and pissed off I'd want to twist Inuyasha's cute little ears off. The idiot needs a cold dose of reality, if he doesn't want her, someone else will come and try to take her away eventually (and of course I'm infering Kouga here, which brings me to a question). Will Kouga be making an appearance in this little tale of yours?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 11:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~blinks up at you~ Please ma'am, I want some more. ~holds out pen and paper~
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Reviewed By: stilettofairy On: February 06, 2007 10:54 PST
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This is by far my favorite chapter, i'm glad you took the time to get it right even though i would have liked it alot sooner. i cant wait to see what you've got coming up next.
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