| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: BlackDragona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
is there gonna be a chapter 16, or??? |
Reviewed By: ssj8Gohan On: May 27, 2002 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm beggin u, write more |
Reviewed By: Angel wings On: May 08, 2002 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please wright more please please please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi On: May 08, 2002 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! yay this is absolutly Amazing!!! I've been waiting to read the this latest chappie and it was definatly worth the wait ^_^
The way you manage to get not only bulmas personality perfect but Vegetas aswell is just amazing!!
Totally Fantastical, as always!
Keep up the good work, and don't you dare stop writing, I'll simply die if you do! hehe ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great!! keep up the good work and update soooon!! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 07, 2002 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was an excellent chapter! It does suck having writer's block, and I'm glad you got over it! Yay! Another exceptional chapter, just as I had expected it to be. I love it. There are so many places this story could go. I hope you write another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 07, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Why in the hell do those bastards want Bulma for?! And just when she was so close to bringing Veggie back. Dammit you gotta write more!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *holds head* NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! IT CANT BE TRUE THAT CANT BE IT!!!!!!!! YOU MUST HAVE MORE TO POST. PLZ PLZ PLZ YOU MUST POST MORE ASAP.
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 06, 2002 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, NOOOO! There's no more! How can this be? Oh, what a cruel world!
This story is absolutely beautiful; the picturesque scenes described, the meticulous attention to detail, the originality! WOW! I'd give you a 20 if I could! I am utterly amazed by everything about this story. It's like one of those novels that you just can't put down so you stay up half the night to finish it! Only I did that on the computer. This story is addicrive! I REALLY hope you are going to finish this, it's an outstanding tale! I MUST read more, please!
(Update soon!) |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, excellent chapter. What's going to happen to Bulma and can the Kandai save her? Or will Vegeta finally break free?
Awaiting your next chapter with bated breath, please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
ACK! You can't just cut it off there! MORE! Hehe...great chapter Ember (surely you weren't expecting me to tell you differenly?) ;) |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww...I got a shoutout! *sniffle* Ai shite imasu, watashi no tomodachi! ^_^ Anyway, beautiful chapter...I didn't expect anything less. I can't wait to see where this is all going! |
Reviewed By: amy379821 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2002 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE write more, and soon. I can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: March 23, 2002 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, yet again! Can't wait for the next! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome. I love the insight into Veggie's mind as Bulma refused him like yesterday's leftovers. He didn't see that coming (hehe). |
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