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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 22:14 CST
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Women you and your cliffhangers are driving me crazy. Wow he has thqat much hate for his dad, in all fairness i can't blame him. I thought that maybe if they fought that they could try to work things out. Sad he had to be that way. Now enough said start writing the next chapter :P
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 09:50 CST
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Wow was worth the wait. I hope now that they are fighting they can work things out. great chapter,you have me on my seat waiting to know whats going to happen next..
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Reviewed By: gaetagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know a perfect rating, but I did not stop reading until i was at chpt 16. I have yet to indulge in writing a story quite like it, but I have to admit I am enjoying the read. I love Gohan a little bad, but boy this is great. Even the Yaoi, but the way everyone reacts is just very realistic, well if your a Saiyan! I gave a perfect score mostly for the enjoyment factor that i was not reading critically, not looking for mistakes. I got into the story and i got a snese of what was playing out so any mistakes were ignored, why do people make thier worst editors?? so I saw no error that bothered me, or reconized... I look forward to reading more. GOod luck!
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: September 30, 2005 00:21 CDT
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Okay, so I was just coming back by this evening because I can't get enough of Gohan and Trunks, when I started reading the other reviews and I got to one that made my eye start twitching. (Please note this is a very bad thing.) I know my dear friend the authoress has already made comments to the offender but it really pissed me off to read it. I felt the need to "second" Dharms defense of herself because she deserves the support. So called "reviews" like that just chap my hide. Some readers just don't seem to read warnings or story codes anymore that or they want to be offended to use as an excuse to flame. And by the way, switch, your review gave me a migraine. I also "second" the fact of having no clue as to what you actually wanted to say other than it was meant to flame. Just a little lesson for your future reference, just because you know some big words doesn't mean you know how to use them properly in organized sentence form. Like the authoress has stated, you obviously came to the story biased against such a plot and pairing to begin with. Believe me when I say that I know good writing when I read it, and Dharms is one of my favorites for a reason. Hugs and praises to Dharms!
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Reviewed By: NewUnshelteredLife On: September 27, 2005 14:23 CDT
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I hope you've not given up on these stories. I'm anxious to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: himejima kei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, just had to review to tell you I love your story thus far and can't wait for more. You make Gohan and Trunks sound insanely attractive and I find myself really wanting them to work out well ^^ (oh and, I would've rated the style of writing + grammar and spelling but I don't pay much attention to that when I'm really enjoying a story ^^;)
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Reviewed By: Sierra Ruffner On: August 07, 2005 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a while to get into, not used to reading Trunks and Gohan stories but after a while, I fell in love. Though there were parts in it where I thought Trunks should just kill Gohan and get it over with. And i'm getting this feeling that Jack person is going to be a problem (that's his name right?) but anyways. please write the next chapter soon! can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and when are you going to update The Odd Couple? It's been a while...
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Reviewed By: Saiki Akumu Stampede On: July 15, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, poor Goku! T_T *cries* I really liked it a lot. ^__^ It was a very creative chapter. ^_^ I love the Gohan x Trunks action. ~_^
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kaze Tsunami On: July 14, 2005 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story since chp 1 and it is amazing. YOu have a great tallent i can't wait till the ending!!!!!
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 13:54 CDT
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WOW very powerful and sad.my heart went out to Goku. i only wish gohan can forgive his dad. and michael i don't trust him, he gives me the creeps..can't wait to read whats going to happen next...
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: June 28, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, they finally made up!
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 06:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
He said *I love you* wow so whats next for these two. Great chapter can't wait to read what happens next..^.^
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Title: more
Reviewed By: 555jazz555 On: June 24, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore more more more more more.PLEASE WRITE AS MUCH CHAPTERS AS YOU CAN SOON.no rush.HURRY UP AND WRITE.
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: June 13, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*biting at fingers* Please end the angst! It's killing me!
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Title: niiiiiice ;)
Reviewed By: gohan loves trunks On: June 09, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most orginal story i have ever read and i looooooved it, i hope that you will update soon and i wonder what will happen to trunks and gohan, will they be together again or not??? hmmm i wonder and i got sooo mad at trunks when he tried to choke poor trunksie, awwww i hope that they will kiss and make up ;) please update very soon and i promise i will review, i´m waiting byeeeeee.
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