| "Primal Urges" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: WAH!!!
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH!!! It's OVER! *sobs* They're so happy! *sobs* ~cloudy!~
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Title: GROAN!!!
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh...this was so heart-breaking. The last chapter better make up for it, dammit. ~cloudy!~
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too much. I don't normally like Gohan/Trunks or Goten/Trunks stories...but...this is in a class of its own. Wow. ~cloudy!~
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Title: Baby Fuck
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason I didn't enjoy this chapter as much as the other ones is that Gohan is just plain freaking me out. He keeps using the word "Baby"...it's like he doesn't want to see Trunks as an individual...but a just another person in the long line of "Babies" that have come before. It takes the emotional side out of it, and it just leaves the physical. Gohan can't handle the emotional side of their relationship yet, so he just throws 'Baby' and 'Fuck' around to distance his true feelings from it all. ~cloudy!~
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Title: Gohan's Got Issues...
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Gohan has an extreme case of 'INCONSISTENT MALE ROLE-MODEL' syndrome. He probably has abandonment issues with Goku, and has since tried to replace the love he desperately needed, but rarely received, from his father with the empty sexual relationships with other men. He wants to be loved by a man, but it has progressed to a sexual nature. I'm just surprised that Gohan doesn't prefer older men. He doesn't want to be loved because he's still mourning the love he didn't receive from his father, and he subconsciously feels that if someone loves him, they'll just wind up leaving. He uses sex as a poor replacement to actual REAL love. Poor boy. There are plenty of people in this world with similar stories... He just needs to reconcile with his father in a mature manner what he feels. Oh well...like that'll ever happen. ~cloudy!~
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing isn't anything revolutionary or anything...so I gave it the highest I could give. The story itself, though, is like nothing I've ever read yet...so...10 out of 10 for that! Very good! I've never thought of Gohan as a gay slut. The way you write it makes it very easy to picture him in this way. Cool.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG i loved this so much. This is one of the absolute best G/T I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Please keep up the good work and keep writing. I stayed up well in to the wee hours just reading this. Excellently written.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 02:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
*wipes tear* Hooray for happy endings! The reconciliations were heartwarming, and I'm glad everything worked out (too bad Gohan still has to wear the big glasses, though^^). Thanks so much for finishing this fic!
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Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 05:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the way you ended this and wrapped everything up. The reconciliation scene between Gohan and Goku made me go "awww" to a luckily empty house. :) (Although people should really be used to me talking to my computer by now...) This was the first fic I read of this pairing and I think it was a fantastic introduction. I'll be looking forward to reading some more of your work.
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Title: Sadden
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm happy for them both, and fro the way you ended it. I hope their will be more stories soon.
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw i have tears in my eyes. you can feel the pain between them. Why didn't gohan try to make it up to his dad in those six months??? can't wait to read the ending. great chapter as always.
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Title: bunnicle
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaah, poor gohan! but why hasn't he gone to see his father yet? he can't still be angry with him, can he? your gonna fix that right? And Gohan and Trunks aren't really going get a devorce, right? right? please update soon! gotta know what's gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well done chapter! It looks like things won't work out for them in the end. I hope the long road to recovery is successful. I have ejoyed your character development and plot throught this wonderul story. I look forward the the next and final chapter. Happy writing. :-)
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS? It's good, really good. Please write more. I've got to see what Goku, Gohan and Trunks do. I'm actually curious if Bejita is going to say anything about this too. ^_^
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Title: OH MY GOD!!!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A DBZ FAN FIC WORTH READING!YOU HAVE TO FUCKIN' KEEP WRITTIN' IT!GOHAN HOT SEXY GOHAN WANTI' TO KILL GOKU...MAN I'M DROOLIN'!INCREDEBLE!THE BEST YAOI FAN FIC THAT I READ IN THIS SITE. AND THAT IS SAIYIN' A LOT!
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