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Reviewed By: Poledra On: April 01, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, if you need to pratice lemons then i'm in deep doo doo. ^_^ I liked this it's really original.
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
you should continue it-- its very good!
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: moon-bunny735 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was a really great lemon. Also can you continue the story instead of leaving it a one-shot? Please? :( ^_^bunny
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Title: Heh...
Reviewed By: celestialmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, for a one shot, it was pretty good. Although, practically everything I read by you is good so...yeah. Keep it up! ^_~
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Title: One Shot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Pye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 04:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What was his gift? The kiss, his love(hopefuly not cause thats just lame),... you lost me on that one cap. btw your story kicks major ass so far. Don't slack off! UPDATE!!!!!! NOW OR ELSE!!!! *pulls out cookie* i'll give you a cookie!
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Reviewed By: angelypoo(not signed in) On: March 09, 2005 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGH! You had to make it a one shot! I think you should continue the story! It was wonderful
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Reviewed By: Songiesworld(Not logged in) On: March 02, 2005 09:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I have never seen a short story lemon get so many reviews in such a short amount of time. I for one think that you have a good writing style and hope that you write a new story soon using what you learned from this and making is exceptionally good. KUTGW! Songie
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Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: March 02, 2005 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's been awhile since I've reviewed anything! So ashamed. -_- I thought this was very creative and enjoyed reading it. I thought the lemon was great, not to 'porno'. There are a few spots where you put a 'his or him' and I think you meant 'she or her' and one place where there was a repeat of three or four words. But, it was overall very classy. I'd like to see you continue this one even though it's supposed to be a one shot. Oh, and I like your refernce to his purple highness in 'Second Chance'. Gotta love him! Oh, God! I'm having an eightie's flashback! Scarrrrrryyyy! Anyway, you've opened a few doors in this fic that I hope you will close. For instance, how will Inu act when he discovers Kagome's little tryst? Will Sessy get his lands back? Could Kagome end up pregnant? How long will Sessy last now that he's 'whipped'? and so on and so on.....So, please try on another chapter for size. I'm sure there's a bunch of us that would love to read more! Great job and love your writing! Blue
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Reviewed By: battousai rk8520 On: March 02, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE this should have been an actual fanfic not a one-shot its so good!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zionvangelis On: March 01, 2005 05:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Wasn't too bad. Just keep practicing.
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Title: OH MI GOSH THIS DOSENT SUCK AT ALL
Reviewed By: Anne_WritinAngel (not logged in at the moment) On: February 28, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh mi gosh how can you say that sucks!!!! That was an awesome chapter!!!!!!! Very nicely done!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marianela rivero On: February 28, 2005 18:48 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved it. thats all that i can say cause i was left speechless.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I must admit that the kiss he gave back brings a new meaning of kissing to distraction. I really liked this fic. And won't mind seeing more. It has a nice plot and it's not just smut. Hope you think about continuing this. I would love to see if Sesshoumaru gets his lands back and what becomes of him and Kagome. Later.
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I know you thought the lemon was bad but i for one enjoyed it. Wait, I didn't mean for that statement to sound the way it did but what the hell, it was good. Anyways, I did enjoy the story, I do wish that you would continue though, to see what happens between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. but if you don't thats cool, life will go on as i always say, LOL, but for real you should consider continuing this story it is really good! ^_^
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