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Title: Pwee!
Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: February 28, 2005 13:44 CST
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I'll tell you what I'm thinking... "... more..."
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Huntress19 On: February 28, 2005 12:58 CST
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I love it I and I really want to read more, PLEASE you have to write more. I liked the setting and the characters and how you also depicted Kagome as childloving and such It really adds to the build up of the story
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: February 28, 2005 06:12 CST
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That ... was ... somethin else! No, it doesn't "suck". For being backed into a corner, I think Kagome found the perfect way out of it. And Sessho ... hehe ... why does everything have to be a spell when he doesn't understand it? *silly male* How'd you manage to keep Inuyasha out of the way? I mean, he's always so good at showing up at the wrong (or right as far as he's concerned) time. Anyway, the story as a whole was great. *wonders if there's gonna be a sequel somewhere down the line*
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Title: gooood
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:35 CST
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i like the fact that you put some effort into developing an actual story line for your one shot, instead of just delving head first into the citrus. it honestly makes for a more fulfilling and interesting lemon. please update asap. ;P
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Reviewed By: FlameDancer077 On: February 06, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i dont think its bad at all ^_^ none of you fic are bad ^_^ they are all the best!! please keep up your work as an author, and update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Minty Aeris On: February 06, 2005 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This fic is so amazing! I usually don't like fics in this style where this kind of thing happens, but you wrote it so well! I enjoyed the explanation as to why Sesshoumaru was there, where neither particualarly has the upper hand. You write her interaction with kids wonderfully, and you bring the readers up to date on the situation smoothly and gracefully without any annoying, choppy flashbacks. It takes a lot of skill to jump ahead of the current storyline 60 years and still maintain an interesting plot. Only a select few can introduce original characters without making them seem stuffy or seemingly "perfect", and you are the very first author I've found that can use other lords without making them seem like plot devices. You make everyone real to the reader, like they really exist and you aren't just using them to reach a certain point in your story. Also you managed to refrain from making an oc one of the main characters, but kept them important and didn't kick them out of the story as soon as you did what you wanted to with them. I especially liked Tetsuyaru! ^_^ He's so cute! Um, well, I'm running out of adjectives to describe your greatness, but I'm definitly going to return to this story and check out your other stories. Also, I very rarely actually write reviews, (please don't hate me!) but I just couldn't resist telling you how fabulous your fic is. *Bows to StrikingFalcon's greatness* *Mutters to self "Amazing, simply amazing..."* *Huggles Striking Falcon* Bye! |
Reviewed By: KouseiJL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:19 CST
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SF...you shouldn't have posted this. ^^ Written it, yes, posted, no. I LOVE IT! *sighs* but it's only a one-shot. You're including background and a great atmosphere very quickly! I did notice a reviewer leaving a somewhat disparaging remark...ignore them. ^^ They're entitled to their opinion. Personally, I see improvement in every chapter you write! You just keep getting better and better! Your stories gain more depth and scope every read. Keep up the phenomenal work! Kousei
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: marta178-not signed in as usual On: February 05, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowo This story plot is great even though is a one-shot, something that I Think should be a normal story 'cause is so good ^w^ Hope you post the other half soon!! Ja ne
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Title: chapter 1-one shot
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 05, 2005 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi SF I don't know what you're worried about.This was great for the 1st chapter of a one shot(too funny). But this story keeps nagging at me, like it could of be a spin off or alt. ending to a previous story posted by you. O well I hope to see the other half posted soon. jschu25
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Title: Sugoi!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Hanyou On: February 04, 2005 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue this story, I wish to read more of it. btw, my actual username is Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi, I'm just being lazy and not signing in at the moment. This is catchy, I wanna read more of it and soon, email me if you wish at: hanyou_yoake@yahoo.com Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 14:04 CST
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Hey! Loved the first chapter. Sesshoumaru as a slave, wow, that's something new. I can't wait to read more to see how everything turns out. Update soon!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:30 CST
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Hmmm... interesting start. I look forward to seeing what happens next. I can see where Kagome would have been a little surprised at finding Sesshoumaru as a slave. I have no doubt but that you'll be bringing Inuyasha back into play somewhere in this. eh, I liked it so far!
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Reviewed By: Inu & Kagome On: February 04, 2005 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha just ups and desert them because Kikyo dies and reviewers say you are a wonderful alt. pairing writer. Yeah Right.
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Reviewed By: Lady Bree On: February 03, 2005 23:23 CST
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This is Great I am hopeing for more to come ? well please continu great job
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry ^-^ On: February 03, 2005 23:04 CST
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hey! yay! I know this is just a coincidence, but you used my name, Nina. *giggles* its impossible to ever find my name. you made my day, seeing that. I'm sick and feel like crap and that cheered me up, thanks so...where's the next chapter. *grin* later ^-^
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