| "The King and Queen Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: December 07, 2005 12:40 EST
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yayness... the funny thing is I just reread this entire story yesterday... ^_^ great stuff... I love the new chapter and I love the way Bulma isn't just taking it. Vegeta makes an appearance, and maybe we'll know a little more about this enemy... good... Personally I want to know how Yamacha's involved... I can't wait. I love this little story...
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Reviewed By: bbyadorkable On: December 01, 2005 19:20 EST
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this story (and the prince and princess diaries) is so awesome! i've read fanfic for four years and this is one of the very FEW ones that's really really good :] i hope you're still updating, becuase the last chapter was updated a month ago. pleeeeeease update and finish the story.
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: GenesisSaturn On: November 18, 2005 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finised reading the prince and princess diaries. After reading that epic, I just jumped into this story. I love how you have Bulma acting like an actual free thinking being, alot of other stories would've had her crying and moping around. I just can't wait to read the next installment!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mrs kdc [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"No, your highness. I am saying that you need to be checked out, for the sake of your babies." omg, is she having twins then? ugh, no more cliffhangers, please! i dont think i can take it much longer! :'-(
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Title: eek!
Reviewed By: mrs kdc [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, i love your fanfic so much. as soon as i was finished reading "the prince and princess diaries," i had to read this one! and i really hope that you can update as soon as possible. please don't let them suffer too much! O.O umm, i dunno if you remember me, but yesterday i had asked to be added to your update list (thanks, by the way).... so yeah.... update!
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Reviewed By: Kohaku-dono On: October 04, 2005 16:38 EDT
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This is Kohaku Hoshi, sorry I don't review much, but hey, here you go. -pokes- now be a good author or you won't get a treat.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 30, 2005 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that is like, deep. bulma has lost her baby, gotten beaten and abused, creeped out to the extreme, lost her husband, and now she has to fight a war, not to mention hold together an empire that might soon be doomed! and vegeta is in the hands of the enemy...i bet he's getting tortured. i wonder if they'll torture him until he breaks! and bulma...with all the strain she's under, i wonder if she's gonna snap at one point! i know i would! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate(not logged in) On: September 30, 2005 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O; HOLY SHITE! That was one helluva chapter! Well worth the wait, I feel so bad for Bulma; she lost her first child due to being pushed down the stairs, been captured and abused, lost her husband, and now she has to figure out how to run an empire! Damn! How much torture can one woman live through and come out sane at the other end?! Great job, I love this fic and you are doing a fantastic job of portraying your ideas and the imagery is outstanding. Keep up the great work and update soon! Love ya! V.M.
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Reviewed By: Soylicious On: September 09, 2005 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep updating! this story is getting so suspenseful that i cant wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon bc i dont know how much i can wait(J/K)
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: Ash Ash On: September 08, 2005 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very creative writer. I've enjoyed your first story Prince and Princess Diaries and so far I am loving this one. Your stories are very captivating. I am anxious to read more. Keep up the great work. God bless
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Title: HOLY CRAP!
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was beautiful to the extreme. You must have put a lot of time and effort into it! I can't wait for the next chapter...i bet it's even more excellent!
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Title: Exactly what the chapter is called!: DAMN!
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma...now that's she's all fixed up, it's nice to know that she isn't as beat up as they originally thought. And who the hell is this enemy guy, on top of the one already making their lives miserable!
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Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She seriously kicked his ass! freaking right! and go Vegeta! (for no reason at all, lol)
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the way you describe the city of jighu is beautiful. i wish i was there right now! and oh yes...YUMMY lemon. I have never read anyone's lemons that are as excellent as yours!
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Title: awwwwwwww
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though bulma lost the baby and vegeta doesnt know how, he still loves her and is willing to protect her. i love it!
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