| "The King and Queen Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ra Tai 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 11:38 EST
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I hope you write a chapter soon, because I know Vegeta is going to kick some ass for his wife's injury. This story and the last one is wonderful. Please update.
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Title: "The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 21:59 EST
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wow so sad a chapter..sorry i've been busy but caught up with my reading.. i feel so sorry for them and their lost of their child..i really hope that when things come in to focus with this story, that they would do the same thing he did to that poor BABY... and please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: pyshoitic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: sally alane On: March 10, 2005 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good stuff! keep up the good work!
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Title: excellent!
Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is perfect! I love your style of writing, the deep feelings which emanate from your story, man the pain of Vegeta and Bulma is so deep, and I love the way you describe Vegeta's tenderness. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Buggi On: March 09, 2005 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Hey Hey! What's up girlie? Panny here! I think that you should take however much time as you want to update your story. You shouldn't really base it on reviews anyway. It's the same for me, all the stories I have aren't reviewed alot, but I do have alot of fan, just like you probably do. But like me, alot of them are probably too lazy to review. I know I don't review almost all the stories I've read except one author and that's because she's my fave. But anywho girl! Keep up the good work and fuck all the people that haven't reviewed your kick ass story. It's supposed to be done in your time not ours and I'll wait for however long it takes for you to update your story! Keep on Rockin' hun! Ja'Ne, Buggi aka Panny
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: KarineD On: March 08, 2005 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that was a great chapter, but u better hold me back cuz im gonna tear that evil man into a billion pieces, slowly, so i can hear him yell. haha. im getting way into this. It was great! update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fubuplayer2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well vegeta took the news better then i thought he would. I just love your of style of writting. You give great details in your writting!! Can't wait to read your next chapter!!
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Title: We are still watching
Reviewed By: Getas-PanChan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though at times it may seem that people are no longer reading this fic, they are. And they love every minute of it. There are a few spelling errors here and there, but no one is perfect. I must apologize, for I have been swamped with work, college, and preparing for an anime convention in May lately, so it has been hard for me to find time to read this story, let alone review. As for knowing a beta; I guess know one. I have been a beta for a few years, however mostly for my friend Iapetus. I would be more than happy to help you as well. You can contact me at LastSaiyan@hotmail.com. Now if you'll excuse me, I must go to work. Thanks for writing, and please don't wait a few months to update.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 07, 2005 15:59 EST
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all of your updates have been wonderful... I'm finally catching up on fics... great job adn I'm so sorry I haven't been around to review for you... awesome job with the new story... atleast now yamacha is back.... and can be tortured in the way he deserves...awesome
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Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:14 EST
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Blah, sorry I haven't reviewed lately, that's what I get for taking 4 English classes. =\ Anyway, I'm guessing that it was Yamcha who pushed Bulma down the stairs, that crazy @$$. And poor Vegeta, I'm thinking he was kinda liking the idea of having a baby after all. At least they'll try again. If you haven't found a beta yet, throw me an e-mail. I don't know how much I can help with school and all, but it's not like I'm pouring myself into my work, so I'd be happy to help.
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 23:11 EST
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no no no i don't want bulma to loss the baby.. that bastard why...damn this chapter was to deep and i feel so sorry for bulma lady in waiting..but i on;t hope that so why or another that women would get her revenge...
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Reviewed By: pyshoitic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 12:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good so far!Keep it up!Ja ne!
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Yamcha.. Well this should send him over the edge..(sorry yamcha is already OVER THE EDGE....) what will happen when Vegeta finds out that bulma was push..Up-date soon..
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Title: ~giggles~
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 13:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEKKKK! Who pushed her? Will Vegeta get his revenge? Will I continue to ask questions that really need no answer? lol Great chapter, sorry it took me so long to review it I've been planning a race day banquet and that is too much for one person to do alone u.u anyway I am waiting with bated breath for the next update! LOVE YA!
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