| "Looking into Terror's Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: December 17, 2001 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWAAAAAHHHHHHHH!! I WANNA ANOTHER CHAPTER. Sorry for the outburst but just one more wouldn't kill ya. Consider it a xmas present to your readers. Yeah, I know you wanted your fic to be different from the rest and you've accomplished that, but your story needs more of a closure. You've got the talent and the imagination. So now that I've done my begging and brown nosing for the day, I'll sign off. Peace |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
thank you to all the people who had read and reviewed this fic!! |
Reviewed By: b/v fan!! On: December 16, 2001 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo majin!! u did it once more!! too bad this will be your last chap!! i really enjoyed reading your fic. maybe the others liked it too!! all your other fics are good too! i hope you keep thinking of more good stories cuz they are getting really good! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 15, 2001 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter-I'm enjoying this fic alot. Sorry I hadn't reviewed before. Actually I thought I had but I kinda get sidetracked around the holidays. Anyway keep writing cause I can't wait to see how these two end up together. Peace |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 00:26 CST
Comment/Review:
well, so far so good, but hardly anyone comes and reads any of my fics anymore. I feel so unappreciated... |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 10:43 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, okay. I'll add another chapter for an xmas present. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 05, 2001 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. Well, your ideas are neat, but maybe the story would have a better effect if you tried to be more fluid. Try to take us into the characters thoughts. Slow the pacing down and try to give us an inner sense of what the characters are feeling... ^^ Overall, pretty good.
G.S.- over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow On: November 06, 2001 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
A little smoother writing. The transitions are still a bit choppy, though. Keep it up. I see some better points throughout this! ^^ Maybe you could add some more descriptions to the characters and their surroundings.
G.S.-Over and out! *Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 09, 2001 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
That chapter had some really great dialogue with it... "The real joke is..." and "I' wonder what Vegeta would say if we had a romantic dinner?" meanwhile: "Gyanrrinkanho!" (or however you spell it.. i'm too lazy to go look right now...) It made me laugh! I like their contrasting dreams... |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow On: November 10, 2001 15:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I must say I liked last chapter better, but, oh,well! This is a confusing b/v relationship! From hate to love! Zero to sixty! ^^
A few grammatical errors were in this one, but keep on! If you keep writing, it always gets better... eventually, I think! ^^
G.S.-over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: kali On: November 10, 2001 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic. |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta On: November 11, 2001 22:58 CST
Comment/Review:
chapter 6 is due to be redone! and chap 7 should be coming after that! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: November 12, 2001 19:34 CST
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VERY GOOD! one of the best v/b fanfics ever ^_^!! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta On: November 16, 2001 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry if this chap didn't come so early this week!!! i still need to know if u guys want to read a mafia style b/v fic!!! so write a review if ya guys want to read this kind of style fic thing!! i reall y need to know!!! |
Reviewed By: flamer to the first flamer On: November 16, 2001 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
u suck!!!! Bad to worse is a good fic, but we don't need a fuckin fic rivalry between two b/v fics!!! so shut the fuck up flamer ass!!! have u ever written a true b/v fic thats actually good?
ur such a jackass!!! all the other b/v fics are good to read for inspiration so other authors could write another b/v fic. That's how it goes. so who ever the hell u are i want to see a better b/v fic thanthis one an from bad to worse!! man, ur like dissing all b/v fic authors out there!!! sunnavabitch!! go ahead write ur own b/v fic story and see how hard it is to write and think some more ideas to make the fic better. jes another fic rivalry!! |
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