| "The Price They Paid" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 23:29 CST
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Another good chapter. Liked the musical interlude. Makes sense that they would be good at music as well.
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Reviewed By: LYK On: November 03, 2005 19:36 CST
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I absolutely adore this fic. I look forward to the next update! :D
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: November 02, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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These last few chapters were as amazing as always! Please keep going - I really love this story! I love the pairings too. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: 0.o Two Chappies! ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 15:58 CDT
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Two chappies at once? How did we get so lucky? Never mind, I'm not looking a gift chappie in the keyboard. ^_^ I'm just glad we got them. The whole teamwork at the hold-up was great. Poor Wuffers and Duo, flashbacks suck. >.< But their therapy session was hilarious! I loved the whole facial expression comparisons. Poor Wuffers though. I know he needed the vent, but I hope he doesn't beat himself up too much over losing his cool. I must say again how much I love the way you write Quatre. He SHOULD be as quick witted and conniving as you write him. And his sisters should just be happy he doesn't have a gundam anymore! Who has the other 6%? Is it Milliardo? That would be funny. And poor Milliardo and Relena! That toad better just disappear. I can't wait to see what happens when they see each other again. ^_^ Can't wait for more!
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Title: ^___________^
Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I'm so glad you updated! And Two chappies! ^___^ I liked the flashback and the care of Duo/Wu FEi in light of their episode. It's nice to see a fic where the law enforcement aren't complete neadnerthals (sp?). It was amusing to listen to D+W compare everyone's facial glares. It had me laughing as each expression played in the back of my mind. ^_^ I also loved Wu Fei's tantrum. Sometimes you just have to let go and throw shit. (I just don't recommend doing it while at work...Recent Personal experience X-x) It was very emotional and I loved the space/support his "Family" gave him.(Can I get a massage from Tro too?) The doc's not half bad either, though I did want to... eliminate him for trying to pressure Duo into telling more. While some things are best to let go, somethings aren't meant to be told. I'm looking forward to more Z/W. It's not a pairing I usually like, but I like it here. Evil, Evil, Evil toad! Poor Miss Relena (did I really just say that? I can't believe I just said that! If you tell anyone-I'll deny it!) Being decieved. But really poor Zechs for being lied to, pushed away and abandoned even unwittingly! No wonder he has issues (despite what the war brought on) Who has the other 6%? You have to update soon so we can find out. Pretty please? ^_^ Weissangel24 P.S. I think this is the longest review I have ever written! Ever! Only 49 characters left! I'm impressed!
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Title: YAY! Another Chappie!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 22:41 CDT
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Wonderful! Just Awesome! I love how the gang can cut loose together. Duo + Camping = :( But, with everyone else, I don't really think he should complain much. It just means that Heero needs to keep him distracted! ^_~ And the whole, 'Zechs claimed by Wufei' thing...I'm REALLY interested to see where that goes. Anyway, Awesome chappie! Can't wait for more! ^_^ NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: (weissangel24) On: September 08, 2005 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! I loved it. It was soo funny! I love the banter, love and teamwork! Leave it to Hiiro to be the one to get "Shot". I haven't seen a story where wu fei is portrayed as ... bold? Up front? I dunno... I really cant find a word to describe his characterization in this fic. Anyways I love it! Most fics I read have him being a solitary S.U.T.A. (Stick up the A**)I really dont' think he's given enough credit... Anyways, UP Date! I want to read more!
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Birdy666 On: August 30, 2005 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled accross this fic just a few days ago and started to read and could not put it away stayed up late to finish it was so gripping. I wanted to make it all tens across the board but hey thought it might go to your head so gave you a 9 in S&G because all the other spots where so important to the enjoyment factor I could not decrease those areas.(your spelling and grammer are not bad either) Keep up the good work and update soon I can not wait to see what happens next.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 15:49 CDT
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It's been too long since I read this. I had to catch up 9 chapters! O.o But it was well worth it. I love this story! I love how Quatre's so devious and he's playing up their training to the best of their advantage. And the newest thing with WuFei and Zechs... ^_^. Love it! It's cute! Well, Keep it up! I look forward to another great chapter! ~NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces (not logged in) On: August 17, 2005 19:21 CDT
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Wow, that really was a long review last time, wasn't it? lol ....I loved the obstacle course btw ^-^ and I have to admit that the idea of Zechs having to hold Wufei's *coughs* while he pees is interesting enough to make me spit out my tea when I read that lolol I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter *huggles again* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 18:49 CDT
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He'll hold it... I laughed so hard when he said that... When is Heero actually getting out of the Facility? and will Wufei and Zechs get together in the next chap?
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Reviewed By: coolmorphs(not signed-in) On: August 15, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you used USB this is the 2nd story online I found uesing it! thank you for useing it it make my cold-filled feel better.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! You have to update this soon! I spent two days reading this from the beginning and then to come to the end!? ACK! UPDATE! UPDATE! I love your style of writing. It's very entertaining as well as being able to draw out an emotional response from the reader. Did I mention I want an update?
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 10:13 CDT
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wow...what to say about this chapter? Well I have to say that I wish that I could hit Noin right now. I mean, really, that's horrible. I hate it when someone writes you to tell you something like that. It makes you sort of feel like you're worthless to them because they didn't even care enough to tell you in real life. It's not wonder that Zechs took it as violently as that. I mean, anyone would have done that. I'm so glad though that his privledges haven't been revoked and he and Heero can go and spend some time with the guys ^-^ I can't wait until that happens...I have to say though that my favourite part of the chapter was when Wufei and Duo were having a tea ceremony and Wufei said 'Now, hug me before I cry again'. That made me smile. I hope that during the time that Heero spends there, he and Wufei can find the time for something like that. I think that Wufei needs that. Well there's something going on there with Wufei and Zechs...could it be that Wufei will be the one to ultimately comfort Zechs after his break up? lolol The only thing I think that might stand in their way is the fact taht Zechs is in jail and therefore they can't be as close as often as they would like tobe and the fact that Zechs may not want to do anything like that because it may just rebound. Who knows? Anyway, I love this fanfic and I hope that you get around to updating soon ^-^ This really is a pleasant fanfic. *huggles* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 01:02 CDT
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coolness... I love it... continue soon, please
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