| "The Price They Paid" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: violentfocus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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I'm not sure if you read these, but this is a wonderful fic that i've been reading for a while, and finally decided to tell you how much i enjoy it. Your characterization of all the characters is exellent. I think you have a good balance of fan and canon. I'm also very interested in the gadgets you put into your work. You've introduced me to many new things. Hurrah for fanfiction being educational. Thanks for writing.
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Title: In the Public Eye II
Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:12 CDT
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This is just awesome. I love the mystery as to who is hiding under the tree in the corner of the garden. As always update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 29, 2005 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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* Sigh * These last two chapters have been wonderful. Please update as soon as you can. I really love this fic. It's so cool that Duo snuck in to see Heero. Tee-hee! The part about the interviews was cool too. I'm glad that Zechs and Heero are there together and that they get along. It's good for them both to have some support. Again: I love this fic, so please update soon!
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Title: the price the paid II
Reviewed By: anissa32 On: June 28, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Another wonderful chapter! I feel a little teary eyed with after seeing Heero and Duo together and knowing that they have to part from one another. But I was glad that they were able to be able to spend sometime "alone" together. It is also nice to see Millardo and Heero getting along and learning to become friends with one another. Just watching Heero discover things about himself and what he likes is indeed a pleasure to watch. This is such an awesome story! Please keep up the wonderful work!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:21 CDT
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i wish for you to write much more now. Like Relena's reaction, the end result, some more about the country club? please?
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Reviewed By: peachy On: June 28, 2005 12:02 CDT
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out of this world interesting. i love the idea and plot. so very original. im not much of a 1x2 fan and as soon as i saw that it was 1x2 it should have been instinct for me to stop. but i didn't because i was so very much drawn to the plot of the fic. thats an indication of a very good fanfic.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 00:12 CDT
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With places like Allenville, it's a wonder there isn't more white-collar crime! Jeez, fully loaded suites, "sponsors" (their version of a welcome wagon?), guards that ask before entering(!), refreshments! I love how Duo's little reminders keep coming to Heero at just the right moments. He'd make such a good mother. ;) The interview sequence was very well-planned. As much as Duo spurns living under restrictions, he takes his job at WEI very seriously. I was impressed by his handling of insubordination from people that were older and that might easily hold a grudge. He made snap decisions as necessary (looks like Quatre's skills rubbed off on him), and didn't let any of the footage, that was clearly disturbing, bother him. The scene with Wufei was rough. The reporter just had to take that one... extra... step. Very touching last glimpse of Wufei. You did a very nice job of combining the interviews and film clips. I especially like how the reporter was so animated and reactive in her behavior, but the ex-pilots, even Duo, delivered the facts in a calm manner. They played their hands flawlessly. Quatre's appearance was perfect! The stock buyout was smart; his sisters are idiots if they don't want to keep him as CEO. His warning caught me by surprise, though. It must be nice to have enough money to make such threats, huh? ;) Quick question though - what made Heero start shaking? Was it cold, fatigue, gravity? Very, very good job!
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Title: the price they paid
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I really don't have the words to express how much I enjoyed this chapter so I sent you an email instead. But, I just wanted to say "Great Job", and I'm eagerly awaiting the next excerpt.
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Title: Whoa!!!!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:27 CDT
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i've been reading this for the past three hours.. and... wow... i loved how you didn't gloss over the punishments, and yet you didn't make any of them too bad. Go you! Continue soon!!!!! Meow... (insert paw-print here)
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 17, 2005 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! As awesome as always! Please keep going and update soon! I'm glad they're gonna take the controller away.
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Title: the price the paid
Reviewed By: anissa32 On: June 11, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter update! It was such a treat to see the boys finally together again. I really enjoy watching them interact together as they are thinking about what to do with their lives and if they will even be allowed to live in peace. But, poor Heero! Dr. J. was just simply evil to implant a device like this inside of a child! I'm just glad that they were able to remove it and it looks like this will serve as some ammuniton for the guys that will help their case overall. Thanks for another awesoms chapter and I am looking forward to reading more again soon.
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Reviewed By: Gwfan_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 14:03 CDT
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Cool keep writing this story its a good, i like it
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Title: series so far
Reviewed By: Rochan01 On: May 21, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying following your fic as it develops. I think you are doing a nice job showing the evolution of Heero's personality and his handling of human interaction as well as WHY he is changing. Not just because of "better environment" (doubtful in this situation) or counseling which with his training I think would not have much effect, but because Duo gave him advice, and Heero himself has a goal to achieve. I am also enjoying your contrasting how the public perceives the "fearsome Gundam Pilot" image vs how they see and behave towards the "typical teenage boys" they believe the boys to be. (And that they are pretending to be - nice job with Heero, pretending to be sweet and cute and dutiful, a poor young boy screwed by the system). I like that you brought the judge back into it too so we see he is not a monster with a grudge, but a misled person who thought he was doing the right thing. It is too easy to make your opposing factors into heartless villains but you didn't take the easy way out. I am glad you got to the "Doctors as Commanding Officers" part because that was really bugging me all along.
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 11:18 CDT
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I'm not one who normally reads yoai, but this is really good. Duo doing community service, Heero doing work in the same place as Duo... all of it was well written and flowed together nicely. Keep it up. Get the next chapter posted ASAP.
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Title: Community Service
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:27 CDT
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Whew - lots going on in this chapter! I'm glad Duo stuck to his guns. The poor kid is constantly fighting himself and this time it seems to have paid off. It didn't hurt that the judge wasn't afraid to look outside the box and take action. For awhile I was afraid Heero and Duo would miss each other all day. What a bittersweet reunion - loved the hughuddle! Not sure if Heero will get an Oscar nod for that little acting job, but kudos to the kid for knowing when to milk it, huh? I got a little lost at the beginning of the robbery scene, but once the kids got organized, it flowed much better. You had lots of characters to keep track of, and I think you did a nice job of keeping their personalities and quirks straight. Thanks for the update!
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