| "The Price They Paid" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces (not logged in) On: August 17, 2005 19:21 CDT
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Wow, that really was a long review last time, wasn't it? lol ....I loved the obstacle course btw ^-^ and I have to admit that the idea of Zechs having to hold Wufei's *coughs* while he pees is interesting enough to make me spit out my tea when I read that lolol I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter *huggles again* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 18:49 CDT
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He'll hold it... I laughed so hard when he said that... When is Heero actually getting out of the Facility? and will Wufei and Zechs get together in the next chap?
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Reviewed By: coolmorphs(not signed-in) On: August 15, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you used USB this is the 2nd story online I found uesing it! thank you for useing it it make my cold-filled feel better.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! You have to update this soon! I spent two days reading this from the beginning and then to come to the end!? ACK! UPDATE! UPDATE! I love your style of writing. It's very entertaining as well as being able to draw out an emotional response from the reader. Did I mention I want an update?
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 10:13 CDT
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wow...what to say about this chapter? Well I have to say that I wish that I could hit Noin right now. I mean, really, that's horrible. I hate it when someone writes you to tell you something like that. It makes you sort of feel like you're worthless to them because they didn't even care enough to tell you in real life. It's not wonder that Zechs took it as violently as that. I mean, anyone would have done that. I'm so glad though that his privledges haven't been revoked and he and Heero can go and spend some time with the guys ^-^ I can't wait until that happens...I have to say though that my favourite part of the chapter was when Wufei and Duo were having a tea ceremony and Wufei said 'Now, hug me before I cry again'. That made me smile. I hope that during the time that Heero spends there, he and Wufei can find the time for something like that. I think that Wufei needs that. Well there's something going on there with Wufei and Zechs...could it be that Wufei will be the one to ultimately comfort Zechs after his break up? lolol The only thing I think that might stand in their way is the fact taht Zechs is in jail and therefore they can't be as close as often as they would like tobe and the fact that Zechs may not want to do anything like that because it may just rebound. Who knows? Anyway, I love this fanfic and I hope that you get around to updating soon ^-^ This really is a pleasant fanfic. *huggles* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 01:02 CDT
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coolness... I love it... continue soon, please
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Reviewed By: violentfocus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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I'm not sure if you read these, but this is a wonderful fic that i've been reading for a while, and finally decided to tell you how much i enjoy it. Your characterization of all the characters is exellent. I think you have a good balance of fan and canon. I'm also very interested in the gadgets you put into your work. You've introduced me to many new things. Hurrah for fanfiction being educational. Thanks for writing.
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Title: In the Public Eye II
Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:12 CDT
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This is just awesome. I love the mystery as to who is hiding under the tree in the corner of the garden. As always update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 29, 2005 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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* Sigh * These last two chapters have been wonderful. Please update as soon as you can. I really love this fic. It's so cool that Duo snuck in to see Heero. Tee-hee! The part about the interviews was cool too. I'm glad that Zechs and Heero are there together and that they get along. It's good for them both to have some support. Again: I love this fic, so please update soon!
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Title: the price the paid II
Reviewed By: anissa32 On: June 28, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Another wonderful chapter! I feel a little teary eyed with after seeing Heero and Duo together and knowing that they have to part from one another. But I was glad that they were able to be able to spend sometime "alone" together. It is also nice to see Millardo and Heero getting along and learning to become friends with one another. Just watching Heero discover things about himself and what he likes is indeed a pleasure to watch. This is such an awesome story! Please keep up the wonderful work!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:21 CDT
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i wish for you to write much more now. Like Relena's reaction, the end result, some more about the country club? please?
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Reviewed By: peachy On: June 28, 2005 12:02 CDT
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out of this world interesting. i love the idea and plot. so very original. im not much of a 1x2 fan and as soon as i saw that it was 1x2 it should have been instinct for me to stop. but i didn't because i was so very much drawn to the plot of the fic. thats an indication of a very good fanfic.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 00:12 CDT
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With places like Allenville, it's a wonder there isn't more white-collar crime! Jeez, fully loaded suites, "sponsors" (their version of a welcome wagon?), guards that ask before entering(!), refreshments! I love how Duo's little reminders keep coming to Heero at just the right moments. He'd make such a good mother. ;) The interview sequence was very well-planned. As much as Duo spurns living under restrictions, he takes his job at WEI very seriously. I was impressed by his handling of insubordination from people that were older and that might easily hold a grudge. He made snap decisions as necessary (looks like Quatre's skills rubbed off on him), and didn't let any of the footage, that was clearly disturbing, bother him. The scene with Wufei was rough. The reporter just had to take that one... extra... step. Very touching last glimpse of Wufei. You did a very nice job of combining the interviews and film clips. I especially like how the reporter was so animated and reactive in her behavior, but the ex-pilots, even Duo, delivered the facts in a calm manner. They played their hands flawlessly. Quatre's appearance was perfect! The stock buyout was smart; his sisters are idiots if they don't want to keep him as CEO. His warning caught me by surprise, though. It must be nice to have enough money to make such threats, huh? ;) Quick question though - what made Heero start shaking? Was it cold, fatigue, gravity? Very, very good job!
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Title: the price they paid
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I really don't have the words to express how much I enjoyed this chapter so I sent you an email instead. But, I just wanted to say "Great Job", and I'm eagerly awaiting the next excerpt.
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Title: Whoa!!!!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:27 CDT
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i've been reading this for the past three hours.. and... wow... i loved how you didn't gloss over the punishments, and yet you didn't make any of them too bad. Go you! Continue soon!!!!! Meow... (insert paw-print here)
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