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Title: Hiding In The Darkness
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I finished reading all the chapters that are posted on MM.org and I am adding my voice of encouragement hoping to read more of this story. I found your story on the recommended reading list at Sueric's fanfics forum and I must say that I've enjoy reading all that you've written so far and I'm looking forward to reading future chapters when they are posted. Keep up the good work and I hope to be reading more of your story soon.
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Reviewed By: setsunamoonie On: July 17, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was an awesome chapter i gotta say i wanted lokki to wipe that arogance that Sesh has off his face by kicking his butt. how dare he get mad at inu for "failing" in protecting rin. if he dosen't like it then why did he leave her there with him. is it me or does sesh not like it when rin talks back to him. that errrs me dang it rin is to passive with sesh. sure she is not afraid to stand up to lokki but she's afraid of getting sessh mad. seesh. and poor astuji i dont want him to have his heart broken is there nothing you can do. oh well i guess i have to wait and see i love your fic by the way very good work i cant wait til u update.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:12 CDT
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Thank you for the updates. You write well and I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 05, 2005 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am in awe of your story. The two chapters were quite captivating. I can imagine that InuYasha will be a little excited in some form or fashion with the injuries that Kagome received, not to mention Shirogane's scent on her. Looking forward to that juicy situation. Also, regarding the cliffhanger you left us with, concerning the SPECIAL CHILD, no comment there, do not want to jinx it. That is a can of TNT, just waiting to ignite. Third, The Shirogane/Yukino is definitely throwing a little extra gasoline into this story. Lastly, I am a hard IY/KAG fan, but you are writing the Sesshoumaru/Rin thing so well that I may convert. This could be the detonater in this story. All together, I was super pleased with both chapters and will end my comment with how much I enjoyed reading them. I figure that you decided which way to go with your story, since you posted both chapters, and my thoughts are with you regarding a mentioned surgery. Please take care and get well soon. Health first, writing second. Your fan, Cynbad146
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Title: Bah Watashi no Baka
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and the plot thickens...wow, what can I say, really there are alot of new things introduced this chapter, that make me even more determened to never miss a chapter,and to re-read it when its done. I can't even began to guess how Inuyasha had or has or will have a child that is "Special" the whole "Special" alone brings so many things to mind. This one has the right about of vaguness *not a word i'm sure* to give you a hint at whats really there but it could be so many things in the end. Its torturouse having to wait for updates but as always I will wait without complaint because the product is always better slow cooked *_~ Ja matta ne
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Reviewed By: juromaru On: June 28, 2005 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty interesting
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:53 CDT
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wow, this story is awesome! you've definitely gotta update this thing more!
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Title: I never share cookies
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to give all the cookies to the muses of all my favorite author, cause I just couldn't live without a good inuyasha story to read...I would like to say that, I was...um...lets just say that the scene with Sesshomaru and Rin in the forest gave me warm fuzzies. and that I am looking forward to some warm fuzzies with Inuyasha and Kagome too...oooh and the return of our favorite sukebi houshi
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please continue it but i have to agreee that this is one of the most well writen fics i have read to date and beleve me i read a lot of fan fiction
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 28, 2005 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your writing is so-o-o-o-o talented! I absolutely love it. I am so glad that you have decided to test the waters with an adult Rin and Sesshomaru. Lots of potential here with storyline, angst, sexual tension, jealousy, and love, etc. . . etc . . . etc. I am wondering what will happen between Kagome and InuYasha next; not to mention, Shirogane, Yukino, the emotional aqua brother and sister duo. Please continue with this fantastic story. Take my word for it, I have read a lot of fan fics, and this is one of the best I have ever read. I still believe you will gain popularity as more fans read your work. It has a great deal of feeling and quality. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: cool story
Reviewed By: dennisse On: April 12, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your story keep up the great job.i hope u update soon.plz
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Title: That Which Shines Brittest
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absalutly luv your story so far, keep up the good work.Please write more and update soon I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 05, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The beads! The beads!! What is going to happen next with the beads! I hope InuYasha gets them back. After all, they belong to him. My favorite parts of this chapter are (1st) InuYasha forgetting Shippo while almost kissing Kagome,(imagine how good it would have been if he actually went through with it; (2nd) InuYasha walking away from Kikyo and towards Kagome (almost never get to see this in fics);,(3rd)Shirogane's irritation that his sister was gone when he woke up. Your work is real quality with chapters of substantial length. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:29 CDT
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I like your story. Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: April 05, 2005 09:03 CDT
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Great chapter--mysteries deepen! Inuyasha remains conflicted, yet blithely uncognizant of how he dangles Kagome still? Oh, where's a kotodama when we need one?! Speaking of which, *Shirogane* has 'Yasha's?! Oooo,what a PLOT TWIST!!! Evil cliff, LOL. Yukino's also such a marvelous character. :) Heh, "Enter the Worms" a la Kikyou, eh? FEH! ;) Thanks for the update, looking fwd to more-hey,it's my birthday today 4/5, so thanks for the unknowing present of a new chapter. :)
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