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Reviewed By: T On: March 23, 2005 11:45 CST
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This is a very interesting story. What is the hunt? Is that some time of mating time or something? Great work, update soon
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Title: AAAAAAAHHH Poo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really looking forward to something happening between Sesshomaru's Betrothed's brother, that character seems to much more fun then ol stick up is *exploitive* Sesshomaru. But I know that this story will be fabulouse anyway so please please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 20, 2005 23:44 CST
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This is really my second review. You never got the first one because I screwed up on the upload. I just want to say that I believe that you are doing a fine job with your story. Have you written before? I did not think that your story was amatuerish (is that a word?) at all. I bet alot of other readers agree with me. I am suprised that you only have 12 reviews so far. Keep up the great work and I bet that will change. I will be checking in! Thank You, Cynbad146
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Title: totemo kawaii desu yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh that was just to damn cute between Rin and the brother...I really hope that she teaches him the otherways to kiss...and I really hope things workout well with Inuyasha and Kagome too. I'm so glad you writting an Inuyasha fanfic, its just so good. I wonder what would be a properway to thank a muse?
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Title: keep on writtinf yaaaaaaaa
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poo I didn't get a email for the last update...damn mm.org. Well let me just say, I love that your still using words that I don't know yet. Reading your story's are always like somekind of strange study session. I prey the muse visits you soon and father time promits you to have the time to write.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another action-packed chapter! This new/old tama is quite the complication, as Loki is. Shippou's love for Kagome is as sweet as ever...Inuyasha and she have been separated for so long; I'm so hoping enough time has elapsed they'll be able to finally get it together w/o all the pyrotechnics!! At least at first, LOL. Thanks again for such an engaging story, and marvelous OC's.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:06 CST
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You've got me hooked!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you'll let Kag be with Inu in the end...it would just seem wrong for her to be with anyone else...especially one of Inu's decendants! Well, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 12:36 CST
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This story's unfolding intriguingly! Dare I hope, though, that both Kagome and Inuyasha are reunited? And why does Inuyasha's soul permeate the "sense" of this priest, and his timely Shakajou intervention? Or perhaps this reader is illogically superimposing...::ears droop:: ;) Thanks for an action-packed read,and am hoping for more. *10* years deprived of each other's beloved soulmate?!Poor Kagome *and* Inuyasha, as well as Shippou...!
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Reviewed By: nancey not signed in On: March 09, 2005 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! Great story and very well written so far. don't leave me hanging update soon
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Title: Well hello Again
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kryaaa my favorite fic other has decided to write a fic of my favorite Anime...I'm so please I could sing, or maybe dance. But damn this is good, I'm in love with the suspense and I know its just going to be the sweetest torture to wait for the updates, but you know I will. How could I not read, I mean you were the very first author to make it to my favorite author list. Please Please Please OOOH Muse do not abandon the author, I shell die a slow and painfull death until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: camille's song On: March 04, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a really good story!
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Title: mary.seay@mac.com
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: March 04, 2005 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FUTURE OFFSPRING...OR SOMETHING...FICS I'VE EVER READ!!!! CRAP!!!! Okay, enough with the yelling, but seriously, your writing is SUPERB!!! And of course you just HAD to leave off with a super-humungous cliff-hanger!! ARG!!!!! I can't wait to read more of this amazing fic...interestingly enough, Shirogane reminded more of Sesshoumaru in his actions and countenance, but he insists he's Inuyasha's descendant, which makes me wonder...does Inuyasha not get with Kagome in this fic? Shiro doesn't seem to think that she is also his ancestor, and right now he's intent of making her his wife. Hmm...what's gonna HAPPEN???? I kinda like this Shirogane character (oh hellfire, I already love him!) and I could see he and Kagome together...in a way it fits because she's trying to find her place in the modern world. Is that her destiny? ACK!!! I DON'T KNOW!!!! But sheesh, I'm so intriguied!!! Again, PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 14:20 CST
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Wow that's a really good start to the story. I'm dying to know who they are related to. I wonder. I know it's Inuyasha but who else. So update soon if you can!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: February 26, 2005 09:58 CST
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hey its really good so far you should keep it up ok i cant wait to read what hasppens next i wounder what the jewel is about well i guess i wont know until you up date well thanks;)
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: kag nd inu 4ever On: February 23, 2005 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is really good...keep up the good work. UPDATE plez!! i want to know what happens. much love.
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