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Title: I never share cookies
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to give all the cookies to the muses of all my favorite author, cause I just couldn't live without a good inuyasha story to read...I would like to say that, I was...um...lets just say that the scene with Sesshomaru and Rin in the forest gave me warm fuzzies. and that I am looking forward to some warm fuzzies with Inuyasha and Kagome too...oooh and the return of our favorite sukebi houshi
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please continue it but i have to agreee that this is one of the most well writen fics i have read to date and beleve me i read a lot of fan fiction
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 28, 2005 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your writing is so-o-o-o-o talented! I absolutely love it. I am so glad that you have decided to test the waters with an adult Rin and Sesshomaru. Lots of potential here with storyline, angst, sexual tension, jealousy, and love, etc. . . etc . . . etc. I am wondering what will happen between Kagome and InuYasha next; not to mention, Shirogane, Yukino, the emotional aqua brother and sister duo. Please continue with this fantastic story. Take my word for it, I have read a lot of fan fics, and this is one of the best I have ever read. I still believe you will gain popularity as more fans read your work. It has a great deal of feeling and quality. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: cool story
Reviewed By: dennisse On: April 12, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your story keep up the great job.i hope u update soon.plz
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Title: That Which Shines Brittest
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absalutly luv your story so far, keep up the good work.Please write more and update soon I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 05, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The beads! The beads!! What is going to happen next with the beads! I hope InuYasha gets them back. After all, they belong to him. My favorite parts of this chapter are (1st) InuYasha forgetting Shippo while almost kissing Kagome,(imagine how good it would have been if he actually went through with it; (2nd) InuYasha walking away from Kikyo and towards Kagome (almost never get to see this in fics);,(3rd)Shirogane's irritation that his sister was gone when he woke up. Your work is real quality with chapters of substantial length. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:29 CDT
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I like your story. Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: April 05, 2005 09:03 CDT
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Great chapter--mysteries deepen! Inuyasha remains conflicted, yet blithely uncognizant of how he dangles Kagome still? Oh, where's a kotodama when we need one?! Speaking of which, *Shirogane* has 'Yasha's?! Oooo,what a PLOT TWIST!!! Evil cliff, LOL. Yukino's also such a marvelous character. :) Heh, "Enter the Worms" a la Kikyou, eh? FEH! ;) Thanks for the update, looking fwd to more-hey,it's my birthday today 4/5, so thanks for the unknowing present of a new chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Dennisse On: March 30, 2005 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is great story.i cant wait until you update.please update soon
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah what Inuyasha said just how long is a while suposed to mean anyway...he he figures people would start updating just when I have to go back to school and shouldn't be wasting valiuable study time reading fiction...like studing ever got in the way of reading a good story. I'm so bad and this chapter was so frustratingly good that I would have stopped in the middle of real study time just to read it. I hope I see another chapter soon
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 21:37 CST
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This is a really cool story! I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:08 CST
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Ahh, another torturous development! Shirogane and Yukino, whom know each other best, are as bad as Inuyasha and Kagome in the misunderstanding dept, though certainly, the mutated sibling issue is understandable in stultifying *their* action. Are Kagome and Inuyasha ever going to work beyond theirs?? 10 years is a loooong time for either hanyou or Inuyasha, considering how badly he's wanted her,had nothing to compare all his life as far as any type, mode of accepting love shown, after his mom had died.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 27, 2005 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so very impressed by this chapter! What a great job you have done! Shirogane and Yukino. . .Kagome and InuYasha . . .what angst and sexual tension you have created!! I do not think that I can wait until the next chapter! My brain has split in a thousand different directions on which this story may take. Your original characters are really interesting. I respectfully encourage you to plan on continuing this fic to the end. You definitely have the gift of story telling. Thank you for sharing your gift. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 27, 2005 21:28 CST
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Oohhhh, are you jacking up the tension between the varied players here to unparalleled tension to snap the piano wires of my mind??? That possibility of Shirogane and Inuyasha being related...oh, Kami--to see Kagome and Inuyasha *still* misunderstand the depths of each's emotions for the other--!!!! Ohhhh,that's where I'd thought Yukino's heart lay... And Rin, does she possess and awareness that Sesshomaru is winging his way toward her? Thanks for the treat of a new chapter! :)
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I can't get enough of it. I love the way Inu's been angsting over Kagome for the past 10 years and I hope he'll refuse to let her go now that she's back! I hope his demon blood takes over to claim her as his mate! Also, I can't wait to read about Sesshomaru's reaction when he meets up with Rin again! I hope he dumps that bitch of a fiancee and hooks up with Rin! Update soon please.
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