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Reviewed By: Dennisse On: March 30, 2005 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is great story.i cant wait until you update.please update soon
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah what Inuyasha said just how long is a while suposed to mean anyway...he he figures people would start updating just when I have to go back to school and shouldn't be wasting valiuable study time reading fiction...like studing ever got in the way of reading a good story. I'm so bad and this chapter was so frustratingly good that I would have stopped in the middle of real study time just to read it. I hope I see another chapter soon
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 21:37 CST
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This is a really cool story! I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:08 CST
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Ahh, another torturous development! Shirogane and Yukino, whom know each other best, are as bad as Inuyasha and Kagome in the misunderstanding dept, though certainly, the mutated sibling issue is understandable in stultifying *their* action. Are Kagome and Inuyasha ever going to work beyond theirs?? 10 years is a loooong time for either hanyou or Inuyasha, considering how badly he's wanted her,had nothing to compare all his life as far as any type, mode of accepting love shown, after his mom had died.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 27, 2005 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so very impressed by this chapter! What a great job you have done! Shirogane and Yukino. . .Kagome and InuYasha . . .what angst and sexual tension you have created!! I do not think that I can wait until the next chapter! My brain has split in a thousand different directions on which this story may take. Your original characters are really interesting. I respectfully encourage you to plan on continuing this fic to the end. You definitely have the gift of story telling. Thank you for sharing your gift. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 27, 2005 21:28 CST
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Oohhhh, are you jacking up the tension between the varied players here to unparalleled tension to snap the piano wires of my mind??? That possibility of Shirogane and Inuyasha being related...oh, Kami--to see Kagome and Inuyasha *still* misunderstand the depths of each's emotions for the other--!!!! Ohhhh,that's where I'd thought Yukino's heart lay... And Rin, does she possess and awareness that Sesshomaru is winging his way toward her? Thanks for the treat of a new chapter! :)
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I can't get enough of it. I love the way Inu's been angsting over Kagome for the past 10 years and I hope he'll refuse to let her go now that she's back! I hope his demon blood takes over to claim her as his mate! Also, I can't wait to read about Sesshomaru's reaction when he meets up with Rin again! I hope he dumps that bitch of a fiancee and hooks up with Rin! Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: T On: March 23, 2005 11:45 CST
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This is a very interesting story. What is the hunt? Is that some time of mating time or something? Great work, update soon
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Title: AAAAAAAHHH Poo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really looking forward to something happening between Sesshomaru's Betrothed's brother, that character seems to much more fun then ol stick up is *exploitive* Sesshomaru. But I know that this story will be fabulouse anyway so please please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 20, 2005 23:44 CST
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This is really my second review. You never got the first one because I screwed up on the upload. I just want to say that I believe that you are doing a fine job with your story. Have you written before? I did not think that your story was amatuerish (is that a word?) at all. I bet alot of other readers agree with me. I am suprised that you only have 12 reviews so far. Keep up the great work and I bet that will change. I will be checking in! Thank You, Cynbad146
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Title: totemo kawaii desu yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh that was just to damn cute between Rin and the brother...I really hope that she teaches him the otherways to kiss...and I really hope things workout well with Inuyasha and Kagome too. I'm so glad you writting an Inuyasha fanfic, its just so good. I wonder what would be a properway to thank a muse?
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Title: keep on writtinf yaaaaaaaa
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poo I didn't get a email for the last update...damn mm.org. Well let me just say, I love that your still using words that I don't know yet. Reading your story's are always like somekind of strange study session. I prey the muse visits you soon and father time promits you to have the time to write.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another action-packed chapter! This new/old tama is quite the complication, as Loki is. Shippou's love for Kagome is as sweet as ever...Inuyasha and she have been separated for so long; I'm so hoping enough time has elapsed they'll be able to finally get it together w/o all the pyrotechnics!! At least at first, LOL. Thanks again for such an engaging story, and marvelous OC's.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:06 CST
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You've got me hooked!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you'll let Kag be with Inu in the end...it would just seem wrong for her to be with anyone else...especially one of Inu's decendants! Well, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 12:36 CST
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This story's unfolding intriguingly! Dare I hope, though, that both Kagome and Inuyasha are reunited? And why does Inuyasha's soul permeate the "sense" of this priest, and his timely Shakajou intervention? Or perhaps this reader is illogically superimposing...::ears droop:: ;) Thanks for an action-packed read,and am hoping for more. *10* years deprived of each other's beloved soulmate?!Poor Kagome *and* Inuyasha, as well as Shippou...!
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