| "Lonely Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shinigami On: November 16, 2002 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes widen* Another fiancee? How did that happen? I feel sorry for Aria and the others, since they're stuck with Kuno! What happened to Akane the 2nd? She seems more reasonable... I think she's inclined to be reasonable about Ranma, she might become her friend, if things turns out okay... At least Akane's with her mom, I think she missed her a lot since things changed when Kimiko Tendo died...*whoops and cheers* Way to go boys! U finally stood up to Kuno! Akane
would be shocked if she could see you guys... I think Ryoga's starting to get his life in order finally. Dachi seems to be alright... Kamisama! I just realized that Ranma was with Aria and the other sisters when they were kidnapped! No wonder Ataru's POD! Ranma's proably used to this, but she's bound to be worried... So she and Ataru got engaged? Hm? I want to read about the wedding! Pauline Kuno finally came to his senses? Well it had to happen, sometime... And Kuno's going to be expelled? It's longtime over due... Someone should have taken him into hand a long time ago. But I guess his mom's death affected the Kuno family in the same way Kimiko Tendo's death affected her family... Anyway, update ASAP! I want to know what happens with Elle and Co! |
Reviewed By: kridz On: November 09, 2002 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly a well-written piece of work.Really like how all the different crossover elements can be seamlessly mixed together. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: October 31, 2002 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before, good read! I see I was right about Akane not letting Ranma go! I think Dachi's about ready to let Ranma go, since she seems more interested in Ranma's mirror twin sister, Toshiko... And Ukyo finally kicked her so-called dad out of her life! One Q, through, did Akari know about Ryoga's being P-chan? I never understood why Ranma sent Akane and Ryoga mixed signals, Ranma dropped hints, and also tried to protect Ryoga from Akane...Pls let Akari forgive Ryoga! It's not his fault he got cursed! It's the abusive bastard Genma's fault! He's the one dragged Ranma to China! He should have let Ranma wait for Ryoga! See, Genma dragged Ranma to China, Ryoga followed. Genma got Ranma cursed, making Ranma so POD, he didn't realize that Ryoga was there! I think if Ranma hasn't been so mad, he'ld have been more careful... |
Reviewed By: HolyKnight On: October 30, 2002 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply two words
HELL YEAH!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: October 19, 2002 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a Q. Is Happosai Nodoka's bio dad? Cuz he had an affair with Nodoka's mom, just before she and Hisayo were born. Her older brothers hit Nodoka.. And Isao Asagaya seems to not give a damn about Nodoka, Hisayo, and Ranma. He only want to use Ranma to get even with Happy...I dunno about Hisayo, but she seems to dislike Isao... Add to that Negako mentioned that if only Happy knew what the outcome of Happy and Nana's affair was... She seems to be implying that Happosai just might be Nodoka and Hisayo's bio dad. If it is true, then Nodoka should be trying to build a father-daughter relationship with Happy then! At least Happy cares about Ranma! Good, Ukyo finally realized that her father wouldn't have let it go, and she and Ranma made up. Akane seems to be realizing that reality isn't all it seems to be. Soun-baka should have taught Akane how to control her temper, etc... Poor Nabiki, I hope she is alright, cuz Soun betrayed her, by turning her into a guy!!! All cuz he wanted the Tendo and Soatome school joined!!! Just how did he intend to do it? Cuz he didn't really teach Akane anything other than the basics, and he held back a lot of info!!! As result, Akane's not that good compared to Ranma, Ryoga and Co... Nabiki had the talent, but cuz of Akane's stunt, her arm was badly damaged. Now she's getting back in shape, but it'll be a while before she's in tiptop shape... And Ranma's bonded to Ataru, not to mention she doesn't want anything to do with the Tendos, cuz of Soun's stunt with the man-water at the ill-fated wedding!!! Genma being selfish and abusive to Ranma reminds me of my best friend's situation with her father... She hates her father. Cuz he hurt her really bad. He hit her when she was a kid. Starting when she was 3. Cuz she was 'different' from her older siblings. I don't want to give away that much info about myself over the 'Net'. So I'm not going deeper into detail. As for Genma being abusive, well he is! What do u call throwing ur kid in a pit filled with starving cats?! And all of the stunts he pulled over the years. Personally I have never heard of the methrod of speed eating. I find it hard to believe that there is a such thing of taking other people's food. They call it stealing! My mom told me once that if I ate too fast, I will get sick. I found out that it is true...I'm suprised that Ranma didn't get sick... Add to that, it is considered rude to eat like that... I'm sure that others will agree with me about Genma being an abusive bastard... |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: October 10, 2002 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really fun to read. Althrough I wish there were no more cliffhangers! Cuz it's hard to wait until the next chapter comes out! i want to see how Nabiki deals with what Soun-baka did to her! At least Ukyo's free of what Genma-baka and Konji-baka did to her. What about Shampoo? I know Cologne got it fixed. Akane obviously won't let it go. Kodochi's a hard one to read. Since I was busy reading the fanfic to comment on the spelling and grammar, I cannot really comment. This is pretty original, since I have yet to find a Ataru-Ranma x-over with this plot thrown in. And I'm not certain how to comment on the style. Since when they were talking aobut writting styles in English class, I wasn't paying attention. Gomen-nasai! |
Reviewed By: Amy Lee On: September 05, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, but would you please post and explaination somewhere to explain why you deleted more chatpers? It was looking great, I wanted more, then out of the blue two complete parts just vanish with no reason given. I've still got a copy of your original verson floating around somewhere because you did this last time...
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Reviewed By: Jason Calhoun On: August 29, 2002 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic but what happened to the other chapters? Some are missing from the last Update. and when will a new chapter be up? |
Reviewed By: Nutorius On: July 04, 2002 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im still reading it over and over and over and over.... again, update after udate after update!
still the best story i have ever read. |
Reviewed By: Zoan On: July 02, 2002 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and the rewrite takes what you original written and expands on it beutifully.
I'm wondering if Mie Seikou from TSY will be in it. |
Reviewed By: Kinotama On: July 02, 2002 02:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your rewritten story is great! Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: iWindoze On: June 30, 2002 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics\writers, and I
must admit that I'm much more happier with the
way things are going in the rewrite than I was
before because honestly speaking several of the
characters just didn't feel 'right' for some
reason or another. Now however things have
begun to make more sense and fit together better
emotionally.
The only things I dislike at this point is that
the speech given by Negako to Ranma's mother
is cut short and quite different in the rewrite
than what it was in the first run and I liked
that speech better, especially with the long
explainwtion given about honor, a speech that
Nodoka sorely needs IMHO. I also disliked how
the whole chi-mallet history has been removed,
although I like how Akane is becoming much more
'human' in this version of the story.
PS: Dusk108--Which author created characters are
you talking about? Negako? or Tampopo? perhaps
you meant Chigaiko? The Sister Princess characters
are all from a LifeSim RPG game; Fred Herriot had
nothing to do with their creation! Please reread
the disclaimers dispensing character copyrights,
if you don't beleive me. |
Reviewed By: Dusk108 On: June 22, 2002 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy I hope parts of this story don't actually reflect the authors real beliefs. Death threats abounding everywhere sometimes for as little as saying the wrong thing. Aside from that Ataru is now the supreme martial of the bunch? Just doesn't sit right. Ranma accepts turning into a girl pretty easily and hasn't fought her own fights since Ataru has shown up. Everyone hating everyone else except that everyone loves the author created characters. Plot still doesn't seem to be going anywhere. It had promise in the beginning but has degenerated into one big hate fest pretty much.
Othe than that the style of writing is very good. Very few grammar or spelling errors. However there are som many characters involved it's hard to keep them all staight. |
Reviewed By: fundude frost phoniex On: June 20, 2002 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey as much as i love this story and the others ny this writer the only problem i have is the constant rewiting of older chapters as i am starting to get tired of rereading the same stuff over and over again. also does anyone know if the writer is going to keep writing his other story "Three Sisters"? |
Reviewed By: Nutorious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still going strong i see, and i'm still lovin every sentence of it
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