| "Lonely Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rogue1615 On: May 09, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far. Gives a whole new view on things.
I would of never of expected Nabiki to GO like that. hehehe.
Good luck with the next chapter.
Rogue1615 |
Reviewed By: heh On: April 03, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great job and it took me time to read it too!
i luv long stories.... |
Reviewed By: fundide frost phoniex On: March 30, 2002 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i love ranma-chan stories with ranma gets together with a guy you are a great writer and i am dieing for more on this story keep it up |
Reviewed By: Schobronics On: March 30, 2002 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You turned several characters inside out - and explained it in a really believable way. Great! |
Reviewed By: Lord Void On: March 19, 2002 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
There are only two problems I have with this fic.
1. Ranma turning into a girl. Something that just does not set right with me.
2. The speech Lum game to Oyuki and Benten sounds much too much like what an abused woman might give to her friends who are trying to help her. Otherwise, this is a great fic. |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love what you have done so far and can't wait to see what happen next though I do wander about the cat people you only mention them once and have seem to have forgoten about them. |
Reviewed By: Zoan On: March 03, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story can't wait for more to come |
Reviewed By: Arete On: February 20, 2002 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I mainly started reading this because of the Ranma part of the crossover, but you've intrigued my interest now with your characterization of Ataru to look into Urusei Yatsura. Please, please continue! |
Reviewed By: iWindoze On: January 10, 2002 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I *loved it* the only problem that I've got with this guy's stuff is that he comes up with so many great ideas that he's constantly leaving me wanting more!!! At least now that he's on FanFiction.net and this place I'll know where to find updates! The only thing I could say other than that is "When's the next update?"
[PS: The number based rating system, is that
high = "good," or is that low = "Best?"] |
Reviewed By: spaceman On: January 03, 2002 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like Fred Herriot's other works, Fantastic!
May he produce more chapter VERY soon |
Reviewed By: blackedout On: December 11, 2001 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story even though a lot of the parts don't make sense unless you have read the senior year. |
Reviewed By: Jaques Rico On: November 29, 2001 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Illogical. Often questionable ethics and morales. Moderate level of orginality. High degree of OOCness without good reasons. Ataru looks like a self insertion of the author.
All in all: thumbs down. |
Reviewed By: McHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can we want more, only that you write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Do u know me? On: November 22, 2001 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story.. plz comtinue |
Reviewed By: Amy Lee On: November 16, 2001 22:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story even if it is a little dark and most of the humor of both stories are not evident in it anywhere. Sigh... |
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