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| "The Long Weekend" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wanted to review for this one because it was the first of your fics that i had ever read (atleast a year ago). i think it is a favorite, too. deeply emotional in parts and written better than any m.m writer has any business writing. ^_~ i hope you write more because i can get lost in your stories so easily. you portray tats as a seemingly mature boy, but still an innocent in some aspects. basically, he thinks he's too big for his britches. but, that's what makes him so endearing. the part where he licks the ryuichi c.d cover made me nearly fall off the chair. lmao. poor ryu got a big eye-opener from that one. XD if i could send you an award, i would. keep up the great work!!! i don't rate sp/grammar cuz nothing can be a 10 unless you have a comp. edit, and even then, who cares, really. your fic is very near a 10, tho. even in the sp/gr dept. nice. ttfn.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, Ryu is back! Tohma is well in character as well. An all around delight. Given that T. is supposed to go back to Kyoto in the morning, I can't wait to learn what happens next.
| Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:23 CST
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OMG. This has me too sucked in to just stop here, come on, are you trying to give me a disorder...?
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! What a unique view of Ryu, and yet it fits so well with the manga and anime. This does indeed appear to be a long, eventful weekend with lots of learning going on. Loving every chapter, I look forward to more.
| Reviewed By: gyoza On: March 15, 2005 04:20 CST
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Great fic thusfar. Its nice to read something this original. Nice story line and nice writing style. I`ve got you bookmarked, please update soon!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 14, 2005 17:26 CST
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I'm glad I found this. The way you created the ah humm, "rape scene" and how Tatsuya reacted to it seemed so much _more_ than what many others do from the norm'. It was good and fresh. The plot in this is quite decent. I love Tohma's way of trade with Tatsuya. 'Wash the the car, get to go into N-G.' The only gripe I have is Ryuuichi. He hasn't shown much in the way of his hyperactive side. In the manga he was crazy 95% of the time only briefly acting sane when his music played. It is understandable that you changed him for this. It would be hard to write a serious romance with him going nutso every five seconds, but I take original personalites quite seriously {most of the time that is). Please do write more, like ~RIGHT NOW~. lol No, don't take that the wrong way. It's the cliff hanger, it's driving me to shake my leg (I'm hyper.) Please, appease my curiousity and put me out of my misery.
| Reviewed By: Mandie On: March 10, 2005 17:18 CST
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Great fic. I first found it on aff.net and picked it up over here. I'm wondering what Tatshua is going to do about Yoshi being Ryu. Looking forward to an update. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: AmberEyes On: March 03, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic. I think I'm addicted. I'll be checking for updates. ^_^
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