| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: SilverRayne On: July 10, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd love it if you could add Karasu in the story! I love the Karasu-Kurama tension. Maybe later on in the fic you could add a tension between Karasu-Kurama-Ryou?
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 08, 2005 21:45 CDT
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hmm...good chapter, and now i have no clue who you're talking about, interesting, update soon!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
maddy im quiting soccer and ww. *sniff sniff*. im scared silly. im soooo ganna die!!!. and very good job on the fic. i really like it.
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 06, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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lol Kura-chan is funny, update soon, I can't get enough of this story!
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Reviewed By: Pai_3x3 On: July 03, 2005 15:23 CDT
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I love your story, it's so much fun. You do a really good job on updating regularly, so keep that up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. good chap. and y arnt you on msn any more maddy. i miss ya. i get on and your not on. i get soooo bord!!! but if ya readin this get on soon and update too.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 12:34 CDT
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Hi! ^^ The sentences are better, but I have one thing: When you say 'minuet', you SHOULD say 'minute'. OKay? ^^0 That just bothers me, for some reason. I don't know why. Anwyway, update soon, okay? ^^ Yay for K/K!! *waves Karasu/Kurama flag around. sticks tongue out at velox fox kit.* Karasus is wonderful!! ^^ No one else seems to think so, though...*sniffles.* Why does everyone hate him so much? Anyway, this is cool, so, like, update. ^^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
verey good but this is soooo looking like a ryou/kurama.haha i love this chap. dang ryou got scared. and who was that one guy. the one who told ryou about youko
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
um.. just an FYI, you're lableing the chapters a chapter early, like 40 is labled 41
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 19:52 CDT
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i really like the story, its gotten me really interested in YYH, and i love where the storys goin, please update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chap.tho i still dont like the fact that karasu is still in. oh well i will suvive. i think. lol. any wyas plz update soon. it was really good
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: June 21, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loooooooooooove this story somuch, it took me like an hour to read the whole thing. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: wingweaver On: June 19, 2005 21:00 CDT
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Good story!! I wonders whats will happens to ryou and whens will he knows whats he is. Pwetty pwetty please update soon^_^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww poor ryou is sick. sorry i have not been on but i had soccer to day and i had to go to my moms friends house. so ill try to get on then i get back from oceans of fun. and very good chap. i felt the vid goin in this one. ill talk to ya later maddy. ja
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:12 CDT
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i thought the latest chapter was cool. i felt kinda bad for karasu, letting kurama go... i cant wait to see what happens next ^_^
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