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| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] | Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry...I didn't get to read..I was playing Ping-Pong hehehe...ahem, anyways, Great chapter! Everytime Karasu get nears Kurama, it also sent me the chills! GOD! People have to review, this is the Chillest and the most coolest story I read, well, it's pretty, pretty good! Anyways, you should laso get Ryou a nightmare....and Bakura, the spirit of the ring was inside ryou's dream and he can't believe what he was seeing! ^^ anyways, you can use my idea! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama and Ryou must be having a good time without Kurama! That's so nice...Hey, I got an idea! How about a nightmare of Kurama...some kind of ngihtmare of Ryou and him of their past, you know...anyways, update!
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, what the heck is Karasu up to? And what happen to Ryou? Was ryou still playing with roses? O.o well, that would be hysterical if Ryou was rolling over the flowers like a girl...ahem, anyways, nice new chapter, REVIEW!
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH FOR RA'S SAKES!!!! THAT WAS TOTALLY CREEPY!!! IT EVEN GIVE ME MORE CHILLS!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL LIKE SINGING A BAD SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR KILL SOMEONE!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING NUTTS!!! PLEASE UPDATE! IT GAVE ME HYPER!
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 20:28 CDT
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That gave me the chills! I thought Karasu was about to kill Kuruma in to stone! Phew...that was scary....you know, it will give everyone the chills if Karasu is gonna rape Kurama...WHAT THE HECK AM I SAYING?! Well...it does give chills...anyways, you can us the rape like Karasu just raped Kurama and so.....or do your own idea...anyways, update!
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 21:03 CDT
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KEEP ON GOING1 KEEP ON GOING! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is the coolest story I have ever read! Please continue! The whole story send me the chills!
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 15:47 CST
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Coolsies. This is pretty good...It's a bit choppy, though. Other than that, it's good...And I think you SHOULD put Karasu in...But not as a stalker!!! I love the Karasu/Kurama pairing, if it's ROMANCE...And I'm ALL ABOUT unrequited love, so that's okay, and a little bit of stalking (heh, I'm stalking this guy at school who kinda looks like Kara-chan), but most people just make it....creepy....And that's annoying!! Anyway, it's good, you should put Kara-chan in...^^ You have recieved the official Drof Seal of Approval in the category of Fanfic Writing, and hopefully Karasu Inclusion. ^^ Update soon!
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