| "The First Duel Masters Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Moooore
Reviewed By: HSA2 On: October 21, 2006 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude.... more!! More between Mimi and Sayuki, that's all I wanna see since I'm so desperate for that purple haired teenage anime goddess with the abnormally large tits. (what more is there to watch this show)
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Title: Reviews, Help, and an Idea
Reviewed By: Emmanuel Jones On: November 26, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a huge anime fan, and this one is interesting. "Duel Masters" is a spinoff of "Yu-Gi-Oh!" (Yu-Gi-Oh is better, though, since I have the TCG) Good dueling, funny lines (an orginal setting from the show, I might add), and hot sex scenes, too (with the moaning and sayings and stuff like that). I liked how Shobu and Amami get it on, I do love the sexy yet romantic interlude between Sariyki and Mimi (I'm a sucker for yuri), and I wonder when Juhi admit her feelings to Amami. I had a dream about it last night after I read your story. I'll give the idea if you can e-mail me soon as you saw this review. So I heard that you are a beginner of Duel Masters. Maybe I can help you with the cards. First, go to www.wizards.com, click on the "Duel Masters" logo, scroll down until you see "Card Database", click on it, and finally click the "Search" button to see all the cards available. Click on which card you want, and you can see the detaits and picture of it. Pretty cool, huh? Anyway, that all I can say for now. You can e-mail me at EJONES914@aol.com as soon as finish reading this message. Keep up the good work! I might review you at the next chapter! Please write me back!
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Title: This is good
Reviewed By: Kosgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! It's really good! Btw, are you ever gonna put a Kokujo lemon chappy in? Cuz that would be VERY interesting!! Anyway, just asking! L8r. P.S: Could you please R&R my story? I've got like 2 reviews and that's it!!!
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Reviewed By: Blaze53 On: October 25, 2005 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMOOOOONNNN!!!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Jitsing On: September 30, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. (You could of done more to describe that super sexy girl). Overall you described the duel masters characters pretty well and it was fun to read. When are you going to do the next chapter?
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Reviewed By: yugiohcardshark2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arousal, thy name is yugiohcardshark2... Seriously though, get off your lazy ass and update this fic!
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Title: Yaoi?! Blech!!!!
Reviewed By: HSA2 On: August 05, 2005 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0___0. Holy shit!!!! I just have one word...More! More! More! More! More! More! More! And to all you flamerz...fuck you up your rump ranging, fart catching, yaoi loving asses. Get it through your thick heads that maybe some of us don't wanna see yaoi!!!! Keep writing dude, the best thing about Duel Masters is the lucious deliciously bulbous breasted babes. ^_~
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Title: ouch
Reviewed By: Moon_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is hard on the eyes. My fic atleast has meaning.
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Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: July 31, 2005 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting re-creation of ur Yu-gi-oh Ji! fic using Duel Masters this time. Hope u plan to continue ur other fic and this. Also haven't seen really any Duel Masters lemons. Keep the good work up.
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Reviewed By: you stink On: July 26, 2005 07:22 CDT
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let me fill you in on something there is not a creature in duel master with such a stupid names when i first stared dueling i never thought that any one person could insult anything so bad you sicken me
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Reviewed By: OH MY GOD On: July 26, 2005 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU SUCK ASS YOU CAN'T FUCKIN WRITE TO SAVE YOU ASS!!!!!!!!! READIN THIS STORY MAKES ME WANT TO PUNCH SOMEONE WERES SHOBU AND WHATS WITH BLUE TEDDY GREEN TEDDY ITS SO FUNKIN STUPID I HATE YOU SO MUCH IT HURT DON'T QUIT YOUR DAY JOB
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Reviewed By: Moon_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creatures that have to attck every turn still have summoning sickness.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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