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"Seduction of Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ]
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 Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in  On: November 11, 2005 12:52 CST
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Oh... oh... oh... thankyou. I've been waiting forever to see this. And Ironically, although I know what happened felt good, the part that turned me on so bad I had to make an example of my woman, was that Sessh had stripes... there. I rarely get that turned on, but I was... and now, I want Sesshomaru, for real. I wish he wasn't a damned cartoon. ::growls::
 Reviewed By: Puppet Master nsi  On: November 11, 2005 06:25 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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So Hot! How come you didn't tell us Sesshoumaru's size,but you told us Sephiroth's in the last part?
 Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2005 22:30 CST
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it has been a mouth but you have finally updated but I have to say that chapter was worth the wait. I love all or your storeys so far. I cant wait till the next time you update.
 Reviewed By: tentacle lover  On: November 10, 2005 21:14 CST
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well... (fanning self) let me tell you that this is fucking hot as hell! i can not believe how fucking hot this is! ohs... to have a silver haired bishie with a gold stud in his mouth to suck my so-not-there cock... hanyou is super jealous of sesshoumaru... (waving hand in front of face, fanning self) let me just say, congratulations. this story was fucking hot! i can use it to stay warm in the freezing temperatures i'm getting now. yay! now... onto the review. this is a great chapter. you've captured the mood and i loved the smut and let me say, when sesshy tucked sephy's hair behind his ear, i went, "aww! how cute!" this is a great story and i look forward to more from you! keep it up! i love this story. you're are awesome! hanyou-elf... who is now off to find somebody with a tongue-ring that wants to give hanyou a ride...
 Title: hapylittlelf@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: margyy  On: November 04, 2005 02:30 CST
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me lov!!! PLEASEEEE update soooon!!! ^^
 Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2005 13:32 CDT
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HOT! OMG! :::drools::: this story is SO FREAKING AMAZING! i saw its up for best yaoi on the fiction group. i agree with that. i just found this when i realized that other name is you. ive been reading your other story. i luv you! you do evil cliffies on this story 2. (crys) LOL. PLZ UPDATE!
 Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2005 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This fic is awesome! I love it. PLEASE!!! update soon TT_TT
 Reviewed By: Dylan R.  On: October 04, 2005 17:27 CDT
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Marry me! Sweetheart, once again, you've done it, I need to go take care of business. Wish Sessy was blowing my shaft like that. Marry me! Damn cliffhangers! Damn them! Update.
 Reviewed By: chibirin  On: October 03, 2005 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please update soon i want to read more ill be checking back every few days
 Reviewed By: Nihilatrix  On: September 27, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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I'm still loving this story and the absolutely lovely images it gives me...but AAAAARRGH THE CLIFFHANGER!!! Please, please, pretty please with whipped cream, hot fudge and a cherry on top put up the next chapter soon! ...I'm even saving some clean undies for after I read..:P
 Reviewed By: peaches 279102000  On: September 11, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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i love this fic..plain and simple..please update
 Reviewed By: peachesncream  On: September 06, 2005 20:30 CDT
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This was so sizzling.I had to change undies after reading this chapter.Sephiroth's nipple and tongue are pierced.Then Sesshoumaru blowing Sephiroth.That made me cream my jeans,thats my boyfriend's saying.My boyfriend read this to.He swears you're a male.Are you?We both love you!UPDATE SOON!PRETTY PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT LONG!
 Title: Oh to be a fly on the wall
Reviewed By: nihilatrix  On: September 05, 2005 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gods the hotness! My favorite silver haired ambivalent characters...the only thing hotter than Sephiroth or Sesshoumaru seperate is the two of them making out like tigers together! Sex and violence and long white hair...Now I need a clean pair!
 Title: I need some cold water.
Reviewed By: Comfort_and_Joi [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2005 08:56 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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These two are amazing ... Why can't I be the meat in their sandwich? *pouts* Another killer chapter ... looking forward for the next one!
 Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2005 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow!
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