| "Seduction of Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampirepuppet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! very very very good, i love all the mini battle they have, i dont kno much about seph but i like him already. good work, update soooooooon!
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Reviewed By: vampirepuppet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smirk* i did enjoy that lovely shower sence, well written.
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Reviewed By: snovelor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 16:05 CDT
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It's unofficial but I wanted to be the first to congratulate you. Your story placed in two categories :) Official notices will be coming out soon. = Ren aka Snovelor
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I expected Sephiroth to have a pierced dick. Hahaha! But I love the story so far, please update it soon :D
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Title: **drools**
Reviewed By: love_Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. wow. wow. omg wow. omg i need to go take a cold ass shower!!!! Oh i cannot wait till i see my boyfriend tomarrow!!! WOW! I have read 8 chapters with in like 45 min(wich is prety damn fast for me!!), and i was only palnning on reading one and the rest tomarrow b/c i need to go too sleep...but omg! I realy do want to read the 9th chapter...but theres only so much of this i can read and still be able to go to sleep comptorably!! OH KAMI!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 22:22 CST
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Dam! sexy, and creative. plz write and update! and damn you and your cliffies.
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Reviewed By: Sunnydelight On: January 24, 2006 21:48 CST
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How could u stop there? You're a tease with the way you end the chapters. Update soon, this is really good.
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 07:30 CST
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you finally updated. now update again! LOL! sessys met his match with sephy, LOL. just when i thought they was going to screw you did a evil cliffie and end the chapter.(crys)PLZ UPDATE SOOOON! 8)
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Reviewed By: CrystalTeardrops On: January 22, 2006 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I don't read crossovers. The pairing of these two pulled me in. You've done a magnificent job of bringing these two together. You've kept them in character that is a peeve of mine where they are made to be too tender and romantic. I see the slow building of the relationship between them. The sex is very detailed and sizzling. The dialog is perfect. The only complaint I have is that you need to update quicker. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 - not logged in On: January 21, 2006 23:46 CST
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you make ua wait so long but it is worth it. I loved the last chapter and I think I know how he got in the room and if im right then i think that is cool that you are making sephiroth be able to do all the things that he can do in the game and or movie. Ill be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 10:22 CST
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(laughing) well, i must say that this is an amazingly funny chapter. not only did you manage to keep these incredibly sexy bishounen in character (and give them some rather amusing touches) but you've made them incredibly more desirable than they were before. how hard that is! you've got an amazing control of who these characters are and who you want them to be in your world, and i must say, i'm rather enjoying this story. please, keep up the good world, it's a great story, and i'm enjoying it thoroughly. i must say, that my favorite part in this chapter was this: "that the cuckoo clock has a butcher knife embedded in it." all the male posturing, all the hot references, all lost in this little spark of humor. at least we know that sephiroth means what he says, ne? hanyou enjoyed it and i look forward to the next chapter. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: puppet master n.s.i. On: January 20, 2006 16:10 CST
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hot. though I think their cocks are a bit to big. those would hurt
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Reviewed By: Sunnydelight On: January 09, 2006 23:19 CST
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This is too hot for words! It's been a long time. Please, please, please update.
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:19 CST
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Hawt! :::squeals::: you updated. now update again!LOL! that was so hawt. sephys pierced tongue going there.oooooos.i luv you! PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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