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| "Diary of Shuuichi minamino" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 15:17 CDT
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That was a great story! You know the drill, update! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 15:17 CDT
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1: You used 'your' instead of 'you're' several times. 2: It's Mukuro, I believe. 3: ^^ Really good story. I love it. The 'your/you're' thing kinda spoils all the goodness, though, so work on that. ^^ 'Kay? 'Your' shows possession and 'you're' means 'you are'. ^^ Gods, I am SUCH a geek...Sorry. This is, like, really good. Update soon, 'kay? I should get someone to beta-read my ficcies...I always read the chappies I post, and I find some of the STUPIDEST little mistakes, but I'm too lazy to fix them...^^0 Er, yeah, that's off the subject...Anyway, it's really good, so update soon...Say, *since I'm desperate for reviews...^^0* could you possibly drop by and give my poor little fics a look? And, y'know, review? No one ever reviews...8.8 Sorry, I'm sick and ranting....^^ Anyway, this is, like, a really good fic. I'm suggesting my friends read it. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: blackkitsuneRyoku(not logged in) On: April 12, 2005 15:53 CDT
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This was great. ^_____^ Update soon please.
| Reviewed By: miz_maliki On: March 16, 2005 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(And for some reason that message did not post...) Anyways: I loved it! My writing is nothing compared to yours- but thank you for crediting me!
| Reviewed By: Miz_Maliki On: March 16, 2005 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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