| "Slowly Sinking And No One To Save Me" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: joey_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah so sad but so happy i lvoe this story adn the ending just blow me away i really loved it!!! you have some seriously wicked skills!!! i wish i could write have as good as this!!! you are most defently in one of my fav. writers. i love the poems too!!!!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 15:16 CDT
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I loved it, but it's so short *whines* can't wait for the epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 12:22 CDT
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wow, it's getting pretty dangerous now, I'm at a complete loss of what is about to happen, update soon please!
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Title: aka Dark Magician Girl Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (Not logged in) On: August 04, 2005 04:02 CDT
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For some reason I couldn't review on ff.net, so I'll review here. ^_^ Anyways, I feel so sorry fo Ma'at, it really isn't fair for her, but regardless, I want Bakura and Ryou together. But hopes that Ma'at will still somehow be ok. Write more soon, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: barisax On: July 31, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No alternate endings? Why not? Thanks for taking the time to write such an interesting story! I wish you the best of luck on your poems, I think they're getting better all the time!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (just came back from france) On: July 27, 2005 14:23 CDT
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I so so so so love this story! and I'm SO SORRY I haven't reviewed yet.. I was on a vacation to france so I just hadn't the time to review! and neither do I have the time now.. anyways a short review for you here! *flicks hand* TADAAA
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Reviewed By: Nubian Jewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 17:49 CDT
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Story E
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Reviewed By: forever broken (to lazy to log in) On: June 12, 2005 13:09 CDT
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poor poor ma'at! I really feel sorry for her! and I thought she was so bad! and paniwi is right it isn't atemu's fault either! anyhooble! Bakura is so sweet towards ryou! and pwetty please with sugar on top LET BAKURA AND RYOU STAY TOGETHER!! and don't kill yami either *pouts* and I still pitty ma'at now! how can anyone do that to their family!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: June 11, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_o AHHH!!! That was super sad!! I like totally hated Ma'at because she wanted to to take Ryou away from Bakura. But now i feel so sorry for her. What her father did was totally evil!! When i read it i was 0o0 NO WAY ::tears:: It soooo sad. Even if i do feel sorry for her im still routing for Bakura and Ryou because their totally HOTT!! Please update soon because i gotta know how this new mind like thing with Ma'at is gonna affect Ryou and how Bakura's gonna act? AHH i don't know so PLEEEEEEEEASE update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like how the plots coming! Very surprising things! ^.^ keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: June 07, 2005 02:58 CDT
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poor poor Ma'at, I'm sympasizing with her now...though it wasn't yami's fault either.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do feel sorry for Ma'at. Poor girl. Also for her mother and her brother. Her dad was an ass. Update soon, please. I like your poetry.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ryou his life is so complicated. Great job. Update soon.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your poems. I don't know why I haven't reviewed in a while but I am enjoying this immensely.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (at school) On: June 03, 2005 01:27 CDT
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poor poor Ryou, if he chooses Ma'at Bakura will lose it, if he chooses Bakura ma'at will probably kill him on the spot...poor poor Ryou *snif* and I loved the poem, it flowed so well
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