| "Slowly Sinking And No One To Save Me" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: May 28, 2005 10:03 CDT
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this is getting interesting...all those love-triangles, can't wait too see what Ryou is going to do, and how the ishtars are going to respond. a little question about the different versions, how are you going to fit that in? plz update soon (and you're writing isn't crappy, and yes, once again the poem was really good!)
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Reviewed By: forever broken ( to lazy to log in) On: May 23, 2005 05:08 CDT
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eyos! YOUR POEM IS GREAT! AS ALWAYS! so stop whining about the poems they are really good!! *winks* and so is the story.. I don't really know what version I like the most.. but I like the ones with bakuraxryou! and FINALLY bakura kissed ryou! it took you a long time.. or should I say Bakura to find out! *can't stop smiling* yaaay finally! and RYOU DON'T YOU DARE CHOOSING FOR MA'AT!! go bakura!! ah well.. i'm ranting again! buh buy! and please update sooner! *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: May 22, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a perfect 10!!! The kissing thing at the end with Ryou and Bakura i was all => YAY!!! FINALLY!!! I definatly want Version A or Version C. But I don't know what im gonna do without any updates ::crys:: its gonna seem like forever!!! I totally love the new chapter and the poem! I just love how you start avery chapter with a poem because it just fits sooo well!! Even if you are going on your trip PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE try and update before you leave!!! Oh and congrates on getting out of school in a week!!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 23:23 CDT
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This is great!!! I can't wait till you update this next time! And please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job I love this story! Your good at Writing! Especially your pomes!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: May 16, 2005 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truley LOVE this story!! I like check everyday to see if you've posted a new chapter because you updat sooooo fast. One of the best things about this story are your poems. THEY ARE AMAZING!!! They just fit the chapters so well. I can wait to see what happens. I really want Ryou and Bakura to get together! HURRY AND UPDATE, PLEEEEEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (and forever broken) On: May 14, 2005 14:16 CDT
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please don't do anything stupid to yourself, always look on the bright side of life *hums* I love your story, if it helps any, and you should consider becoming an actual writer, and work on your poems as well, they're wonderful! really they are!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: May 07, 2005 02:01 CDT
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I love the yugi-ryou action it was cute!! HURRY write more i can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: May 06, 2005 10:01 CDT
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cute, gorey, sad, this story just has it all!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: May 03, 2005 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooo much. This chapter was really great, i loved the poem it was awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. Pleeease hurry and update.
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Reviewed By: paniwi and forever broken On: May 01, 2005 05:27 CDT
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FB: wow, good Paniwi: I'll say, only the ryou-being-attacked thing, it's kind of cliche, otherwise, another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: April 24, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! How much do i totally love this story!! *holds arms out wide* this much. I can't wait for you to update. This is seriously the best Bakura and Ryou fan fic thaT I have EVER read!! Pleeeeeeeeeease hurry and update!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I hate seeing Ryou suffer but enjoy this just the same I hope he tells his Yami soon.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 03:13 CDT
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yeey, marik and malik are nice and not too psycotic for a change. I really love this story, keep it up. good luck with the moving and all o_~
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have actually made me cry! I love this story, please update soon!
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