| "The Sweet Scent of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:29 EST
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Wow that last chapter was amazing!!! The other two were good and funny and all but the last one was great. I loved the section where Yamcha was thinking that here was something that he could teach Goku and that this was something he was better at and had more experience in. You just nailed Yamcha while at the same time keeping Goku in wonderfuly innocent character. The idea that Goku needs ki stimulation was wild. I almost feel sorry for poor Chi Chi. I am so looking forward to reading the conclusion of this. I'm running off at the keyboard now and that is very unlike me to do so I'll stop here. Thank you so much for writing this. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:52 EST
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*still laughing too hard over DESSERT Bandit to give an intelligent review* Oh, oh, oh, this was so funny! I love you, OE!
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Reviewed By: Kinoha-sama On: March 26, 2005 04:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA HAHAAAA!! Man... I'm dying with laughter right now! Man that was funny! I'm not really into this kind of fics but this was damn funny! It looks like our Goku-boy needs little rougher treatment...hehee... Though I'm little offended since I'm a die-hard Goku/ChiChi fan after all, but I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I hope in some point G+CC are having some action too. Please? The biting thing is nice and funny. I mean Goku is just showing his affection...hehheee... Man. Never drink coffee when reading something this funny...* wipes the screen and keyboard * Especially when Bulma told Yamcha to make out with Goku! Muahaahaaaa...heeheh hheee...And the way Bulma behaved...Somehow I can imagine that and Goku's rection...Neve thought about writing more comedy? Anyway! Writies!
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Reviewed By: GutterBall (not signed in) On: March 26, 2005 00:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Priceless! OE, you always kill me! I hope you add more to this soon.... Even with it being Yamcha, I gotta say that I can't wait! *cracks up* Poor Goku! All those years of telling him to keep his hands to himself (remember the dreaded *patpat*?), and now they want him to get all touchy-feely!
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHH! *rolls around on floor moaning and crying because of laughing so hard it hurt* Owwies... oh owwww! Oh, that be good! *rolls around some more, snickering and snorting (how inelegant)* Oh, the next chapter should be a doozy... *stars crying* Mwahahahaha... hehehe... is Roshi being allowed back in for that one?
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:18 EST
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I'm so psyched as to where this is going to go! I rarely read a fic in the Dbz fandom that has me in that delighted state of "what's next? Are you kidding me!?" Smooth narrative as always, great Bulma dialogue, little authentic touches that only make the humor hit harder. This fic is a true original--I always say that about your stuff!
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