| "The Sweet Scent of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved it! It was bloody hilarious with the right amount of realism in some parts (pheromones and all that). Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so that's why she's the Screech Beech... You know, if I had that bishie in my bed every night and couldn't get him going without risking life and limb, I think I'd be in a bad mood all the time too. Well, I'd be in bad mood because I'd be half dead all the time from multiple rounds of rough sex, but to each her own, ne? Fantastic fic, truly. I had several good laughs, there was only one typo that I noticed - "chance" instead of "change" (don't quote me on the chapter #, but I think it was Ch.2) - and it really did make sense in relation to the canon timeline. Very, very well done. :-)
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:19 EDT
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what an utterly charming end to a really fab fic. This whole story was just drop-dead funny as well as sweet and real. That's such a fine line and you walked it so well with this fic. Sorry it took me so long to get to the end. And I'll take four bottles of "eau du Saiyan"!
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: April 21, 2005 02:52 EDT
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Wow this story was absolutely hilarious, and even though it's a comedy it makes sense, and definately explains a lot of things. I liked the way you subtley hinted that Bulma would be using the formula in the future, i got a flash forward image of her dousing herself with it in a hopes to seduce a certain someone lol great story and a lovely depiction of Yamcha and all the characters, but i just particularly enjoyed reading about a Yamcha i wasn't annoyed or angry with, well done
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Reviewed By: EleneK *Do i really have to log in? No? Good. Didn't want to anyway.* On: April 20, 2005 00:07 EDT
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Yes you are right there are a lot of little loose ends and this last chapter did feel a little... rushed. But, it was throughly enjoyable overall. It made me laugh and smile and now I'm really bouncy. I'll look for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 22:22 EDT
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awww, that was great! NOW, at last, I understand DBZ! :-D I thought the ending was perfect--although I'd love to see what else you come up with to tie up loose ends. (wouldn't mind seeing that Yamcha-Chad action as a side attraction either). And I'm so going to use that word "dobutsu-jin"... believe it or not, Shu and that doggie mayor were on my mind today. (Yes it's been a weird day). Love this story! *applause, applause*
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Reviewed By: passionscented On: April 19, 2005 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write mooooooooorrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!!! pretty pleeeeeaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeee!!! my overall rating for your work would be 11/10... but the numerical system here is being humble... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 10:05 EDT
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Ohhhhh - I loved this!! I am in such a slump over yaoi at the moment - but that Yamcha/Goku scene was wonderful... :D I think I may have found a new favourite couple... yum. I really like the way you've used Roshi too - I can't help but have a soft spot for the old letch :D Poor, darling Goku though... I'd be happy to let him bite me in exchange for sex!! Oh, I loved the way Yamcha let him bite his arm, I've always loved Yamcha, it's really nice to see someone giving him his due and showing him as the stand up, decent guy he actually is. Great story - I look forward to more :D
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 02:57 EDT
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Oh, I like Roshi, perv and all! I'm glad to see you using him here. Wonderful chappy, sweet and hot and heartwrenching! Big thumbsup!
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Reviewed By: MeLY On: April 09, 2005 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny story! I would be funnier if Bulma ends up having sex with Roshi without realizing it until the end.
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Reviewed By: Webtester001 On: April 09, 2005 17:09 EDT
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Wow that was great! The smell thing makes a lot of sense. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're freaking brilliant. This is not only the most original and hilarious orgy I've EVER read, it's "real" and believable and somehow captures the spirit of the anime. *shakes head* Your writing has only skyrocketed in quality since your Goku's Prostate Exam fic. I'm just gaping. No one else does what you do. It's just a great jolt in the old pleasure part of the brain to read your stuff! GO ROSHI!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 18:03 EDT
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Finally catching up on my reading and what a GEM! How do you do this? You can take anything and make it laugh out loud funny, yet it's real as well. I thought the characterizations were spot on. I particularly loved Yamcha's sweetness with Goku. Such a nice touch. Very well done.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: girlinthecurl03 On: April 03, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. I never ever ever thought that I would read a Goku/Yamcha fic. It wasn't really my cup of tea, but I must say that it was very well written and extremely funny! Kudos to you for pulling a scene like that off! And also for even writing a Goku/ChiChi fic in the months after their marriage. It's so hard to find any GOOD fics about this time period, and it's the most interesting to me (besides the 3 years for Vegeta/Bulma, hehe). I can not wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: TheRedeemer On: April 03, 2005 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone is so In-Charcter its absolutely amazing! Too bad for Yamcha getting his arm bit up like that, but at least it wasn't his neck or Goku'd have a whole new set of issues to deal with *phweew*.
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