| "The Sweet Scent of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: passionscented On: April 19, 2005 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write mooooooooorrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!!! pretty pleeeeeaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeee!!! my overall rating for your work would be 11/10... but the numerical system here is being humble... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 10:05 EDT
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Ohhhhh - I loved this!! I am in such a slump over yaoi at the moment - but that Yamcha/Goku scene was wonderful... :D I think I may have found a new favourite couple... yum. I really like the way you've used Roshi too - I can't help but have a soft spot for the old letch :D Poor, darling Goku though... I'd be happy to let him bite me in exchange for sex!! Oh, I loved the way Yamcha let him bite his arm, I've always loved Yamcha, it's really nice to see someone giving him his due and showing him as the stand up, decent guy he actually is. Great story - I look forward to more :D
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 02:57 EDT
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Oh, I like Roshi, perv and all! I'm glad to see you using him here. Wonderful chappy, sweet and hot and heartwrenching! Big thumbsup!
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Reviewed By: MeLY On: April 09, 2005 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny story! I would be funnier if Bulma ends up having sex with Roshi without realizing it until the end.
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Reviewed By: Webtester001 On: April 09, 2005 17:09 EDT
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Wow that was great! The smell thing makes a lot of sense. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're freaking brilliant. This is not only the most original and hilarious orgy I've EVER read, it's "real" and believable and somehow captures the spirit of the anime. *shakes head* Your writing has only skyrocketed in quality since your Goku's Prostate Exam fic. I'm just gaping. No one else does what you do. It's just a great jolt in the old pleasure part of the brain to read your stuff! GO ROSHI!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 18:03 EDT
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Finally catching up on my reading and what a GEM! How do you do this? You can take anything and make it laugh out loud funny, yet it's real as well. I thought the characterizations were spot on. I particularly loved Yamcha's sweetness with Goku. Such a nice touch. Very well done.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: girlinthecurl03 On: April 03, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. I never ever ever thought that I would read a Goku/Yamcha fic. It wasn't really my cup of tea, but I must say that it was very well written and extremely funny! Kudos to you for pulling a scene like that off! And also for even writing a Goku/ChiChi fic in the months after their marriage. It's so hard to find any GOOD fics about this time period, and it's the most interesting to me (besides the 3 years for Vegeta/Bulma, hehe). I can not wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: TheRedeemer On: April 03, 2005 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone is so In-Charcter its absolutely amazing! Too bad for Yamcha getting his arm bit up like that, but at least it wasn't his neck or Goku'd have a whole new set of issues to deal with *phweew*.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:29 EST
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Wow that last chapter was amazing!!! The other two were good and funny and all but the last one was great. I loved the section where Yamcha was thinking that here was something that he could teach Goku and that this was something he was better at and had more experience in. You just nailed Yamcha while at the same time keeping Goku in wonderfuly innocent character. The idea that Goku needs ki stimulation was wild. I almost feel sorry for poor Chi Chi. I am so looking forward to reading the conclusion of this. I'm running off at the keyboard now and that is very unlike me to do so I'll stop here. Thank you so much for writing this. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:52 EST
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*still laughing too hard over DESSERT Bandit to give an intelligent review* Oh, oh, oh, this was so funny! I love you, OE!
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Reviewed By: Kinoha-sama On: March 26, 2005 04:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA HAHAAAA!! Man... I'm dying with laughter right now! Man that was funny! I'm not really into this kind of fics but this was damn funny! It looks like our Goku-boy needs little rougher treatment...hehee... Though I'm little offended since I'm a die-hard Goku/ChiChi fan after all, but I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I hope in some point G+CC are having some action too. Please? The biting thing is nice and funny. I mean Goku is just showing his affection...hehheee... Man. Never drink coffee when reading something this funny...* wipes the screen and keyboard * Especially when Bulma told Yamcha to make out with Goku! Muahaahaaaa...heeheh hheee...And the way Bulma behaved...Somehow I can imagine that and Goku's rection...Neve thought about writing more comedy? Anyway! Writies!
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Reviewed By: GutterBall (not signed in) On: March 26, 2005 00:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Priceless! OE, you always kill me! I hope you add more to this soon.... Even with it being Yamcha, I gotta say that I can't wait! *cracks up* Poor Goku! All those years of telling him to keep his hands to himself (remember the dreaded *patpat*?), and now they want him to get all touchy-feely!
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHH! *rolls around on floor moaning and crying because of laughing so hard it hurt* Owwies... oh owwww! Oh, that be good! *rolls around some more, snickering and snorting (how inelegant)* Oh, the next chapter should be a doozy... *stars crying* Mwahahahaha... hehehe... is Roshi being allowed back in for that one?
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:18 EST
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I'm so psyched as to where this is going to go! I rarely read a fic in the Dbz fandom that has me in that delighted state of "what's next? Are you kidding me!?" Smooth narrative as always, great Bulma dialogue, little authentic touches that only make the humor hit harder. This fic is a true original--I always say that about your stuff!
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