| "The Sweet Scent of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: The Sweet Scent of Passion
Reviewed By: Drool.... On: April 04, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marry me. I'm ain't no lesbian or bisexual, but if you marry me, for our honeymoon, you can write me another hot foursome. How about it?
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 27, 2006 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* Excellent! A wonderful story indeed! I loved how you ended it ^.^ Very suggestive about what really attracted Goku to Vegeta in the beginning.
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 26, 2006 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! This chapter was HILARIOUS! Poor Goku's just not into it and Bulma's getting all pissy because of it. It was funny how she was threatening him into saying he liked it. *chuckles* Bravo!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 08:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I give two thumbs up and applauses. This was fantastic. Very original even though I'm not a big G/CC fan but I had to read it when I saw how many people were involved. Oddly enough I'm writing a story and there is a brief mention about scent playing a role in seeking a mate. Granted it's for another anime but the idea is there. I enjoyed your story and I'm happy to see someone made use of Yamcha without making him into such an ass. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kadeta On: May 08, 2006 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow your fic was seriously origianl I loved it even though I don't usaully like the whole ChiChi/Goku thing. But you really mad it cool. I don't know if it was the Yamcha/Goku thing or what. But anyway I give you Major (!!!!) props for it. Keep it up! Kadeta Royale, Princess of Vegeta-sei
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious, and original! Bulma certainly did seem like a porn star, and I loved how Goku was aggressive. I love his sweet nature in a lot of fics, but he has to act like a Saiyan sometime! I loved it! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! Maybe the night before Goku leaves for the Cell Games or something (how else could they get Goten? :P).
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: September 16, 2005 20:37 EDT
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My goodness--this was so funny! You really captured that DB spirit, with everyone all grown up and so innocent still, no evil Saiyans looming. I love the Yamcha/Goku thing; their time together alone was such a good guy moment, not "gay" at all, whatever that means. Everyone so IC, that was really a pleasure. I did wonder "why" no one went to check up on poor Chichi. . . The Bulma/Roshi moments were fantastic--his presence really added to the fun. The dialogue was great, the writing in general very smooth. I don't remember anything that jarred me out of the story, except the hilarious moments when I had to bend over the keyboard and choke back the laughter. This is the first fic of yours I've read, and I'm eager to read more. I hope this rather lame review gives you some happys for your day! SE-QUEL, SE-QUEL, SE-QUEL. . .:-)
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Title: Gaffaw
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just caught up with this little gem. And I laughed myself silly. Oh my. Hot and hilarious. I adored Yamcha, he was the nicest of the bunch, really wanted to help. Bulma was a hoot, taking part any way she could. And a Roshi moment or two. Wonderful. And poor Goku, forever clueless, except for that epiphany about Vegeta's scent. Yeah. And Bulma keeping the eau de Saiyan "for later". Great stuff!!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 11:43 EDT
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Oh my goodness! This is so original and funny. There's so much I liked about it. It was plausible and Yamcha was so awesome. Great fic!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved it! It was bloody hilarious with the right amount of realism in some parts (pheromones and all that). Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so that's why she's the Screech Beech... You know, if I had that bishie in my bed every night and couldn't get him going without risking life and limb, I think I'd be in a bad mood all the time too. Well, I'd be in bad mood because I'd be half dead all the time from multiple rounds of rough sex, but to each her own, ne? Fantastic fic, truly. I had several good laughs, there was only one typo that I noticed - "chance" instead of "change" (don't quote me on the chapter #, but I think it was Ch.2) - and it really did make sense in relation to the canon timeline. Very, very well done. :-)
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:19 EDT
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what an utterly charming end to a really fab fic. This whole story was just drop-dead funny as well as sweet and real. That's such a fine line and you walked it so well with this fic. Sorry it took me so long to get to the end. And I'll take four bottles of "eau du Saiyan"!
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: April 21, 2005 02:52 EDT
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Wow this story was absolutely hilarious, and even though it's a comedy it makes sense, and definately explains a lot of things. I liked the way you subtley hinted that Bulma would be using the formula in the future, i got a flash forward image of her dousing herself with it in a hopes to seduce a certain someone lol great story and a lovely depiction of Yamcha and all the characters, but i just particularly enjoyed reading about a Yamcha i wasn't annoyed or angry with, well done
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Reviewed By: EleneK *Do i really have to log in? No? Good. Didn't want to anyway.* On: April 20, 2005 00:07 EDT
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Yes you are right there are a lot of little loose ends and this last chapter did feel a little... rushed. But, it was throughly enjoyable overall. It made me laugh and smile and now I'm really bouncy. I'll look for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 22:22 EDT
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awww, that was great! NOW, at last, I understand DBZ! :-D I thought the ending was perfect--although I'd love to see what else you come up with to tie up loose ends. (wouldn't mind seeing that Yamcha-Chad action as a side attraction either). And I'm so going to use that word "dobutsu-jin"... believe it or not, Shu and that doggie mayor were on my mind today. (Yes it's been a weird day). Love this story! *applause, applause*
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