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Title: On the Night of a Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 26, 2008 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is an awesome fic. I mean wow. Very detailed and full of intense emotion, I applaude you at being able to harness those in your story. A lot of it even had me wincing more than once. I've read this before some time ago but didn't realize you had updated so I re-read it all and had to skip most of the scene when Kouga gets front row seat. Ouch! Stupid Kouga, should've gone and got help. I cried too. Haha. Just out of curiousity though...are you adding more to this or is there a sequal? I hope so, leaving off where it is right now would just be too cruel. The suspense is killing me. Also I'm curious if the baby miraculously survived. Suspense! Also curious as to how Kagome handles life afterwards and being around people. What momma's reaction is when she seeing her current condition and finds out what all happened. I gave you a 10 on everything because I felt this fic deserved it. The writing was excellent, very much what I think it would be like in an actual book. Didn't really see any grammar mistakes but I was so into it that I may have just completely missed it. Very creative. I really don't think anything needs to be said about this part. You gave enough info that our own minds could see pretty clearly what happens yet left out enough so it wouldn't be a problem. I don't know about anyone else but I enjoyed reading this a lot. Shows how cruel one could be and the unlikely allies in others. Action, romance, horror, drama, suspense, etc. All my favs, what more could you ask for. Overall....well 10 was the highest I could go but it's actually higher. I hope you add more, good luck if you do and I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story you haven't updated in a while. Why is that? This is one of the best Hiei and Kagome fics ever written and I would love to read more of it. PLease continue! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 00:58 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story has been nominated in the Best Angst category. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, I am begging you to update ASAP. I'm dying to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. I really really wanna know what happens next. Please for the love of KAMI update SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 22:55 EST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! It can't be over!!!! ive been reading and reading and reading hoping to get to see what happened to kagome in the future with hiei but then it !!!ended!!!!! pretty pretty please with a mountain of sugar on top CONTINUE THIS STORY!!! When i first started reading it i was taken back by how horribly dark it was but dark can be good it was so entertaining with such good twists i'm guessing Masakuza put himself into aiko's baby -bastard- !And what about Kagome's baby!!!! please please please update!!!1
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Title: NEED. MORE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nour-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a mind-f*** and a half!!!! I would SOOOOOOO appreciate it if you would add another chapter to this! I could probably come up with my own ending in my imagination but then I would miss out on your amazing writing. You would make an amazing professional writer! Please, please, please, pretty please add one last chapter????
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Title: Awestruck
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A review couldn't possible tell you how awestruck I am with this story. Straight tens across the board. I have to tell you this is my favorite Hiei/Kagome story that I've ever read and certainly my favorite story from you (of what I've read so far, but I can't imagine that it could get any better than this.) You completely drew me in with this story. Kagome's lost innocence and Hiei's helplessness really struck me. I wanted to cry at many points in this story and still don't know how I pulled through it with my sanity. The progression was paced and very real, not rushed at all. You really managed to portray the bond between them so well and the torture they both went through only served to bring them closer together. Your writing was very mature in this one. It felt different than your others. It was very dark and so very passionate. An excellent portrayal of Hiei. But I must tell you I cringed when Hiei was being raped. I just wanted to cry. I can't stand seeing Hiei helpless, but it had to be done for the progression of the plot. He did it to protect Kagome. A very poignant moment with me was when Kagome had to choose between Hiei and Kouga. I could feel her pain through your words and I was heartbroken. The discription of this story says "complete", but the ending seems inconclusive. I'd love to see a continuation. I am left needing more.
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes fall out of head* You. Are. Amazing! Please, please, update! This is a great story. What happened to Kagome and Hiei? I want to know!
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Reviewed By: WhiteDemoness11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the first Hiei/Kagome fic I ever read. I still haven't found one that beats it and hope someday it will be updated. So well written, disturbing, and wonderful. Love it. ~WD
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: November 13, 2007 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why why whhhhyyyyy! I need update. ;;;pulls self accross floor like injured and dieing, reaching out;;; Pleeeaaaassseee. I check your story everytime i come on and nothing... I need to here the ending. Even if it's a chapter or two or 50. I don't care i just want it to be complete. Any who, as you can tell, i love your work. hope to read you soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sabriel8 On: November 06, 2007 15:30 EST
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Yeahh, okay in my last comment I applauded your ability in being able to make everything come to life but after reading the chapter with Kouga... I don't know.
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Reviewed By: Sabriel8 On: November 05, 2007 15:04 EST
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So, just the other day I was reading madmiko's "Black Widow Miko" and I instantly thought of you. I think your story...Silent Regrets was my first time EVER reading a crossover, let alone a Hiei/Kagome story. (I'm usually all for original pairings) But, BUT after I spent a lot of time reading through next to all your stories, I found I enjoyed crossovers like nothing else. Haha. I actually read "On the night of a blood red moon" a while ago and am just starting once more, but damn if I know what you find wrong with it. Haha. I love the story and the plot, all your ideas, honestly! They're so original and makes me wonder how you do it. I'm extremely picky when it comes to reading fanfictions and I don't usually read incomplete ones, but I think what drew me the most to your stories was the fact that when you write it actually seems like an extension to the real thing. All the characters and their habits and mannerisms...just the way you write O.O it truly is spectacular. I'm not to fond with how you left off but...from what I remember, I liked how you tied everything together and the ironic kind of twists. Everything is so graphic, but at the same time it really makes a person see what's happening you know? I Love it. Continue On! Hurry with the revisions! This story's continuance has been too long in waiting >.>
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Title: HEY!!!!
Reviewed By: Eternal Kenmei JM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey are you going to update any time soon? It's way past overdue.
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 17:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please Please Please continue. I really love Hiei/Kagome pairings. please finish. I LOVE YOU!
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