| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 On: September 30, 2005 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the most well written and interesting lemons i have ever read. please keep updating i love your writing.
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Sithathoryunet On: September 30, 2005 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chaper is good, really good. Well worth the effort it took to write it. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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Title: Tesmoname
Reviewed By: Concrete no Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The climactic scene to the spring like tension! And it was very good too. What really did it for me was the realistic way you handled the lemon. It was very fitting-the way you described it left the reader knowing, in no uncertain terms that they had a long way to go before their lemons were explicitly passionate. Eh, weird choice of words to describe something like that, but I felt that was what it was. It was something more basic and primal-and it was heart warming at the same time because it involved the most basic type of love. Acceptance, need, etc. These emotions really played well in this chapter-and for that i have to thank you two, for yet another enjoyable read!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 17:10 EDT
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Ryukotsusei this lemon didn't meet my expectations, it soared right over them and into the clear blue sky. It must have been so hard to write. But I'm very proud of you. ^^
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 15:50 EDT
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This entire fic is very impressive. Violent, bloody, dark and messy, heart wrenching, gasp inducing, shocking at times... It's really amazing how much they've all gone through. I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story moves from here. You did a good job in chapter 17. I can easily see how it would have been terribly difficult to write the interaction between Hiei and Kagome, but you did yourself justice. Nothing less than what I've come to expect from you. :) Keep up the great work!
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 13:10 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: tessiefanfic(not signed in) On: September 30, 2005 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..that was amazing. the way you wrote it was perfect...not only did you not make her enjoy it... u made it so that is was beautiful...am i making sense? what i mean is, that other writers forget what has happened and she is not bothered by the memoires..however you did not do it that way..i'm amazed at how you wrote this chapter..it blew me away...i hope this don't offend you..i couldn't think of how to put it...you made this chapter perfect...btw..I'M SO GLAD YOUR WRITING AGAIN!! till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Tesmoname On: September 29, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the greatest chapters I have read in the story! Not just because it was super eventful (and full of dark fluff-as well as not so fluffy things...) but also because of the amount of detail, the lengths you went to get across the pain that Hiei is feeling.. that you stressed this tension out (perfectely might I add) has definitely alerted all readers to an approcing event that will have a big effect on the fic. I love it-already I find myself pouting at the non-existant link to the next chapter! However, despite my bitching, know that I appreciate (as well as everyone else I am sure) your continuous updating habits. You are a dedicated author, bursting with creative ideas, and it shows in your work. This is my favorite fic, out of all of yours (all are great) and it is my belief that this is one of the greatest psych/angst/dark/fluff fics out there. I eagerly await the next addition to this fic!
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, I read it before when it was only a couple chapters long, i just about died when there wasn't a conclusion... Now I found it again and have read it again, only to have no conclusion, If only I could have found it after you had posted the time when Hiei gets to be intimate with Kagome, even if it wasn't the end of the story. I would have at least survived, but now... i can feel my spirit leaving my body. Please update soon!
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Sithathoryunet On: September 23, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall a 10. It was nice to see Kouga again. As for the lemon, I was half expecting Mazakasu to show up. It's going to be interesting to see where this goes. And please don't let that one person discourage you from writing. Your stories are wonderful and it is obvious you have plenty of followers who love your work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 23, 2005 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do i get the feeling that the next chapter will be the climax of this whole heat thing. Good work and keep it commin, Pwease an Tank ou... ^_~
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 15:31 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiting eagerly for next chapter!
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Title: cont'd
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S. plz contine to update a.s.a.p!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that is dark and u know what, i like it, notice i say like? not luv? anyways, when will hiei and kagome get da hell away from where they are now? and r u going to make a hiei and kagome lemons soon? yes i met LEMONS
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