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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: luv it!
Reviewed By: Relena04 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update as soon as u can. i love the story.
| Reviewed By: 2 lazy 2 sign in (Guardianovthe3rdGate) On: April 03, 2005 17:00 EDT
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This story is sad. but it's good. update soon.
| Reviewed By: happy_mnky On: April 03, 2005 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I'm a tough critic, but I must admit, you are a freaking genious. I haven't seen this sort of plot used before - quite original, and since I'm the kind of person that you could almost call twisted, I loved it. The whole thing. I don't like the sappy fics - you know, the ones where 10 out of 11 of the chapters consist of sweet nothings. With as detailed and graphic as you got with the latest chapter, I am drooling for the time when Hiei gets his sweet revenge. This is definitely a fic I will watch like a hawk for updates. Please update soon - you now have a devoted follower.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they get free soon!! I love your story!! Well I love all of your stories^_^!!!!!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 03:01 EDT
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5 reviews in a row! Hah, I wonder... where, oh where, have all your other reviewers gone? I think I'm going to be hunted down for spam soon... Heh, it's 6 reviews with this one. In fact, my reviews practically dominate the page. This says some- *is knocked out again, by a very angry muse* Muse: Why me? What have I ever done to deserve this? *stomps off, thus ending the review spree that Rabid was inflicting upon you this dark, and gloomy night, where the wind howled starkly in the sky as she was knocked out again... T_T such abuse, such abuse...*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:57 EST
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Hah! I am awake again! My muse can't knock me out for long! Anyways, something is happening betweem Ryuji and Hiei, whether the beginning of a very, short alliance, called 'Kill Masakazu' or a building of tension, I'm not sure. Hm, it seems that Kagome is all but resigned to her fate, almost as if she doesn't see any hope or light in the future... like she's given up I guess. Is it up to Hiei to save her? Will Rabid's muse knock her out again? Or will Youko remain utterly angry about that last bout with her soul? Tune in next time, on 'On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon', and on 'On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon' Rabid's review, and my fic, 'Humor Me'! Yes, I'm bored, and no, actually... sleep sounds good about now. Ryu, my friend, you have no idea how I am beginning to long for AIM just too chat with you about the newest revelations in our seperate stories. Yet somehow, I don't see myself indulging in these things anytime soon. 'till next time! *is hauled off by muse*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:47 EST
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Heh, the protection code I got this time was 'SHEZ.' Which I will pronounce as 'GEEZ'. Hm... I sense a bit of irony there. Perhaps the system is telling me too shut up already? ^-^ Anyways, as I was saying, if Youko appears, but doesn't meet Kagome... I know! Perhaps he is after something that the Bastard has, and he, with his group of bandits, goes after it, and during the confusion, Hiei and Kagome escape. Though really, that's up to you, as it's your story. As I was saying before that thought, if Youko came but didn't meet Kagome, perhaps he'd be doing business with that Bastard, or something... hm... the possibilities of what is going to happen is vast. So vast in fact, it makes me want to continue exclaiming how vast it is. *nods* Yep, pretty vast. 'Vast'... what an odd word. Okay, now, off of my random 'vast' streak, and onto your story. This chapter... seemed more like it was there to appease your fans than anything, but I think I saw something begin to build between Ryuji and Hiei. Perhaps, Hiei will use Ryuji to help him in his goal of killing Masakazu, though I doubt that. Maybe a temporary alliance of sorts? Or perhaps, what I saw was tension. Though really, as I doubt Ryuji reported the fact Hiei had escaped, perhaps... the possibilities are so va-*is muffled by an annoyed muse, who had hung around after helping with the last chapter*... Muse: Don't worry, she'll shut up now. *thud is heard* She'll leave a review next chapter!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:38 EST
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Next chapter's up! Not 5 minutes ago. Thank you, thank you. Torture methods are fun to ponder whilst in class, or just while generally doing nothing... mentally. Hiei would use a few? I'm glad! Though I think boiling oil would do as well. ^-^ Er... heh, so that Bastard comes mostly from your co-author's twisted mind? Hm, tell him, "Rabid shall one day hunt down MasaKazu kill him, then feed the remainder of his twisted body to Ryuji." Or, if he's reading these reviews, or not, I can't really tell, you have no need to tell him. This chapter, made me hit my head. For some odd reason, I was thinking Kagome and Hiei were in the same room, thus they would be able to talk... and it just became evident to me that they aren't. Blame it on the upcoming tests, projects, and other fun stuff life enjoys throwing at me. Yes, Hiei has always struck me as curious. Truthfully, I think he's still a kid even though he's gone through so much... 'cause whenever he's with Yusuke, Kurama, and Kuwabara he seems nearly anything but 'cold' at times. Though that could just be me... I'm good at labeling things like that, ne? After all, I am Rabid, the now unsleep-deprived writer... *falls asleep* Heh, okay, so I am sleep-deprived. But not as much. Youko... dunno, I don't think he should see Kagome. Knowing him, in all his horny, spirit fox glory, he might just reciprocate on what the others have done, or try, and freak out Kagome. Though it would be interesting, as he would meet up with either Hiei or
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:59 EST
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Hm... today it shall be... fire. Yes, fire. He's going to be burned to death, and have his limbs all cut off at the same time. Also, prior to his being burned, he'll have been soaked in gasoline, and splashed with holy water. I like this one... heh, I'm not freaking anybody out, ne?
| Reviewed By: Rabid is not logged in at the moment, leave a message after the beep On: April 01, 2005 18:48 EST
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And today's suggestion! Hm... Shabopo's idea is awesome... but here is the next death of him: He is tied up in an all you can eat buffet or... poptarts. Hiei gets to stand over him and whip him so he doesn't stop eating the cardboard(in my opinion) and soon explodes or... dies of dehydration. I think my death suggestions have been more comical and degrading than actually scary lately... ah well! ^-^ Shabopo is right, human's are social creatures, and even if they try not too, will attempt to talk to someone, even themselves if no one else will listen. Even though Hiei might not respond, she'll probably talk to him, and sooner or later he'll give in. Or something. I dunno... ah well, Shabopo's managed to hit it deeper than I did today... but that's only for now. And the fact I've been staying up late finishing reports and such lately... *latches with her teeth onto word limit just because she can*
| Title: O_o!!!!!!?????
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 22:04 EST
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I'm hocked! I can't stop reading it any more. And I guess it's not THAT bad. I mean... hiei's cute. He doesn't even like her yet and he's still trying to save her! How cute! Why can't Hiei like me and be my boyfriend? Anyway... update soon!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 20:50 EST
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Ugh. I have to verify the review four times before mm.org accepts the spam code! If it stops working for me, I'll be upset. [stupid rate limit!] Ryuji considers Hiei a ticking bomb, soon-to-be exploding... And yet he'd still like to be given him? The guy has some consistency issues to work out. Oh, I'm now totally freaking out and thinking she's going to be impregnated by those creeps. Especially as any potential purifying of her body her powers might attempt would be stifled by those bracelets! One thing to consider... Kagome has a pretty high pain tolerance; she didn't scream or cry when Mistress Centipede ripped the shikon no tama- as well as a huge hunk of flesh- out of her side, and that was the first time we know of that she was ever really hurt. So I'm thinking her ability to withhold screams is going to be coming back to her; obviously rape and sexual abuse is a very different think from general violence, but once the initial shock passes, she'll be too stubborn to scream much. She grumbles, but... she keeps her composure well, except in regards to her temper, which I assume will be flaring at some point. At the same time, healings or no, if she goes through the same amount of physical abuse constantly, her body will give out. I'm thinking Masakazu knows that... and it might be worse to just sit in a cage, never knowing when you'll be taken again- tomorrow or a week. Anticipation makes things even worse.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, rabidfangirl101's death-suggestions are interesting. I personally recommend castration followed soon after by a meticulous flaying off of his skin, whin then would be treated to a hydrochloric acid massage... Afterwards, I'd kick him in the shins. repeatedly. [nod] I have to say- Rabidfangirl's reviews always spur my thoughts... keh, it's a cycle. [grin] her review(s) are longer here, but I think I've got her beat on ff.net...! not that it's a competition, it just is something that amuses me. Something add to the idea of the two just waiting silently, dreading for the next appearance of their abusers... enough isolation can literally drive someone insane; humans are rather social animals, frankly, and Kagome is especially so. There's got to be a point where she'd say something... anything... to break the silence. When there is silence, she is trapped with her own thoughts, spiraling downwards, her bitterness and depression steadily growing. She might even fear losing her own sanity, and talking just to help keep her mind, to remind herself she's human, an intelligent being, and not just some body to be used. An attempt, perhaps, to salvage her humanity? [blink] A thought just occurred to me- he's 15, right? How old is Kagome in the fic? I don't recall you mentioning it, but that be due to my innate blondeness showing through. It's a little odd to consider her the older person, perhaps an adult...I'm rather eager to see how he gets around the bindings...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:15 EST
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Today's murder of him! ^-^ I'm beginning to wonder at my own sanity... this one is far more sadistic than the last. Force him to do all the homework I gained today. Yes, much scarier. The other idea I had involved burning ropes, vegetable oil, and target practice. I hope I'm not freaking you out with this... *laughs nervously*
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