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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: 3 reasons
Reviewed By: Arukas09206 On: September 01, 2005 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this for 3 reasons. 1: I'm going to start out by saying that I have been a fan of yours for quite awhile. I first read your work on ff, and since then your originality, creativity and down to earth perspective has never disappointed me. I look foward to when your other stories are revised and/or updated. Now enough of my hero worship on to number 2: this story has kept me on the edge of my seat for quite awhile. It has to be one of the most twisty, gripping stories I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next. 3: I have been checking the update dates on the story and it says it's updated twice but on chapter 1. I don't know what's up but it's killing me. well i look foward to your updates.
| Title: 3 reasons
Reviewed By: Arukas3223227 On: September 01, 2005 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this for 3 reasons. 1: I'm going to start out by saying that I have been a fan of yours for quite awhile. I first read your work on ff, and since then your originality, creativity and down to earth perspective has never disappointed me. I look foward to when your other stories are revised and/or updated. Now enough of my hero worship on to number 2: this story has kept me on the edge of my seat for quite awhile. It has to be one of the most twisty, gripping stories I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next. 3: I have been checking the update dates on the story and it says it's updated twice but on chapter 1. I don't know what's up but it's killing me. well i look foward to your updates.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 23:04 EDT
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*smifles* I liked Kouga. *sniffles* But keep going it's a good story, heart-wrenching and horrifing but good. *wipes eyes*
| Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 07:34 EDT
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I must say the darkness can be a bit disturbing but I think it adds to what will be Kagomes strangth if I'm not mistaken at what you are attempting. Poor Kouga. I understand why it had to be that way but still poor Kouga. You have a few grammatical errors but the story is still very well written. The darknes is a bit upsetting but I still like the story. You definately get points for orginality. I hope you get the sufficent reviews to keep writing this fic.
| Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 14:41 EDT
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how clould you do koga like that oh my god god god wow that was intese im going to go take a bath now.
| Reviewed By: ~kim~ On: August 28, 2005 14:28 EDT
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so sad. i was really hoping that kouga would make it out somehow, but... a well it is still a great story and i can't wait to see what will happen next and how you're going to take it from this dark place it is in now. i really hope that it will look better in the near future.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 18:20 EDT
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You've set things up wonderfully. The Crow is evil incarnate. Kagome is broken. I hope Hiei and Kagome get to finally start climbing out of their pit now.
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: August 25, 2005 23:39 EDT
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Heh, if nothing else, these chapters gave me quite a bit to think about. I wonder when you'll get back to the modern era, and continue that part of the plot? I'm also curious to see just how Hiei and Kagome will be re-united- and how she'll react to his past/future. I think she'd understand. And really, would she trust anyone but him? She's far too damaged emotionally for her to feel comfortable around her family, in my opinion, and she might wonder- Kouga found her. Didn't the others even try? It's not fair to them, but it almost has to cross her mind at some point. She's still retaining her purity/innocence, I think, but in no small part because I believe she is repressing parts of her personality- trying to leave as much of herself closed off to the damage as is possible.
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: August 25, 2005 23:31 EDT
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You mentioned Sesshoumaru... I have to wonder at the significance of that. Perhaps he may take a stand where others fail, if his attention is draw to the group- perhaps if they raid his lands- and while I doubt he cares much for Kagome's situation, his honor would compell him to eradicate those who struck out against him. Then there's the whole paradox issue-! Is Hiei existing in the future due to the prophecy, or is he there regardless? Does he remember things only hazily because of the time spent, and repression, or because time is being re-written? I'd also like to state that I'd really like to know how the 'blood red moon' comes to play- though it seems to be indicative of when they escaped, or when he slaughtered the brigands. Or something of that nature. Then I got on a tangent wondering if the bindings were restricting his youki, or his fire-abilities? Clearly he still maintains his demon qualities, so it can't be total suppression of his powers... and the crow doesn't know that Hiei is the forbidden child. Perhaps a moment of extreme stress might bring out his other side? Would ice magic be possible where fire magic is not? Clearly the bindings have been tailored to fit specific individuals, so I think it's a valid question... Then there's the shikon. If it has power enough to bury it's self in her side, perhaps it can draw on her repressed powers to recharge it's self? And would the crow really recognize Kagome's name...? That seems doubtful to me.
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: August 25, 2005 23:24 EDT
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Is there some further atrocity to awake them...? Or Hiei, finding she's so broken, may become enraged enough to do something about it. It seems to me that the dragon is going to need to take a stand sometime soon. Surely even the crow (I never remember how to spell their names!) will get exhausted at some point, and the others of the gang do need to go out at some point, if nothing else to obtain supplies and their monetary funds. If the crow were to exhaust himself in his sadism, and the others were gone but then I have to wonder why the dragon never attempted to obtain the key. I came to the conclusion he wants solid evidence that Hiei won't go after him before freeing either of them. He's not stupid, after all, and it wouldn't take a genius to realize Hiei's intentions towards them all. A random sidenote- if she's getting healed, would not the scars- or at least some of them- get healed? I don't see the crow wanting his prize completely scarred over- and surely he'll realize that the miko will be too damaged for childbearing- though he knows not of the spell- and have her healed for that very purpose, right? After all if she's driven completely insane, who would take care of the offspring? I somehow doubt he's overburdened with parental tendencies, and he might take that into account, ne? It seems to me he'd enjoy hurting Kagome all the more for revenge on Hiei, as he realizes Hiei's emotions are fixed upon her. A reason for Hiei's survival, perhaps?
| Title: where to start?
Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: August 25, 2005 23:14 EDT
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First off, let me tell you how grateful I am for the edits you sent me. It means a lot to me, and I know it takes time away from your life to do so. Heh, I think I'll start with the whole prophecy gig. I have to wonder- if the prophecy has been shattered, so to speak, would it not simply re-write itself differently? Clearly the fates intend something for the two, and I don't see how the crow could alter so much via stupidity and malice. I don't know, but it did sort of irk me, in that it gave far more power to him than I thought he held. Earlier it was mentioned the the restraints binding both of their powers could be overcome. I would think the trauma of Kouga's death might be a catalyst in that reaction. I also wondered, when they get out- how will Ayame act? If those two were to meet, and for her to learn that her mate is dead trying to rescue a different, once-courted woman, who chose someone else's life over his-! That would not go over well, I don't think. Though perhaps if they encountered each other in the future things could be different. Heavens knows nothing restrains Kouga's impetuousness. Not even learning that the creator of the shards was trying to control them- something that would kill him- he still went on wearing the two, after all. Perhaps Ayame would accept that- or perhaps she won't be involved any more with the story. *shrug* I have to wonder, if such things did not cause the two to break their restraints... what would?
| Reviewed By: MidnightRain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 00:55 EDT
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This story keep getting more interesting. I can't wait for more. Kagome's choice is one that I image will haunt her though it does make sense. Keep up the great story!
| Title: AWWWW NOOOO
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: August 24, 2005 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK OK so i kinda figured it would happen but dang it it was still sad and, and... awwww poor kouga. He just wanted to save her. so not fair. ;;;pout pout;;; though it makes for a good story so props to you. Keep it up. Update soon please... ^_~
| Reviewed By: stix On: August 24, 2005 21:33 EDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
| Reviewed By: stix On: August 24, 2005 21:33 EDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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