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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 19:04 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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-twitch- I wrote a long review for you, and it logs me out while I'm in the middle of it. I forgot how stupid MediaMiner is. *anyway* As far as I can recall.. which isn't very far, as I have the brain of a goldfish. Every fifteen seconds I forget everything. Anyhow, I think while i was gone, it was your fics, that i missed the most. They're so detailed and intricate, and you have such talkent for making the readers love and hate the characters with surprising intensity. I feel so bad for Kagome, but I know it was necessary to make this such a fabulous story. The development of her relationship with Hiei was just perfect. Slow and tentative. But Kagome, gentle and innocent, despite her adventures, I think, needed someone to cling to, in order to retain her sanity. I *ADORE* you even more (if it's possible) for making Midorkio fallible. Most people turn her into somethig like a demigoddess, which is not at all how I see her. People are going to get a nasty surprise when I get my fic up, concerning her. She's only human, and the fact that you recognize that is awesome. xD I'm done rambling. o_o I know left plenty out, As this this is preparing to cut me off, and i had to cut things out of the last one, but oh well.
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 03, 2005 18:53 EDT
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i loved these chapters. they were so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: MidnightRain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I really like this story. I also liked the lemon that you did for this chapter - it was really good. Can't wait for more!!!
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Title: Lemon scene...
Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:09 EDT
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Damnit... god-be-damned characters box! (tries to chew it off the site) Yeah, I hate it as much as the next guy... Anyway, as I was rudely cut off from the rest of my review, I loved the lemon. It must have really been hard for you, especially for the emotions and situation at hand. Passionate yet controlled as Hiei tried his best to be there for Kagome. That was very nice of him, even though he was in his beasty-mode. Kagome must have had some pleasure in it! Oh well, I think I'm done here. Please update soon! Bye for now! Now for the other stories you've made while I was gone!^^
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Title: Chapters that I've missed so far...
Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [not logged in] On: October 02, 2005 21:49 EDT
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Gods, you must hate me for not reviewing. I can't blame anything but myself for it. I have a busy life and my writers block didn't help much, but anyway, to the story! It has developed very well and the relationship between Hiei and Kagome has blossomed very well with the few sexual intercourse's and death of old time friend Kouga. I don't think I could smile after that, no-less be in someones pants but that's my opinion. Will Spirit World ever pick up on Kouga's soul? Will Ryuji ever escape his fate in Hiei's hands? Can Kagome ever get back to her time era? ... mostly likely no but we're getting there!XD I know the younger Hiei wont be able to go with her to the future but I just sorry for the guy.T_T Mating cycle was a good idea to strenghten the bound between them, wonder if the bastard will notice that he did the oppisite of what he was thinking... >>;;; What an idiot... I have to say, men in demon world are morons, I've just noticed. Take InuYasha, Kouga, and mostly the guys in the lair for example. The lack brain-power and I'm happy for that 'cuz I don't think Hiei will be able to pass them when he ventures out into the lair. I best be going... >
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Reviewed By: dangerangel On: October 02, 2005 04:50 EDT
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Your lemon really did meet my expectations. I thought that it was well done, and that it fully covered the feelings and the events surrounding the situation. I am so happy that you didn't have Kagome forget everything that had happened to her. You kept the conflicts that would arive, and you didn't make everything a perfect ending. In this the lemon was amazing. I believe that you did an amazing job, and that you should be proud of yourself.
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Reviewed By: Misty-Sama On: October 02, 2005 03:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Likes... well not the rapes but I love your plot so far your story just manages to draw me in each time I read a chapter. I hope Everyone that raped both Hiei and Kagome have very horrible violent and rather bloody and grewsome pained filled deaths ^-^.(I'm the sadistic type what can I say?) I hope Kagome and Hiei kick some mondo major ass and(I can't believe I'm going to say this) good totally prevails and Hiei and Kagome live happily ever after. Eh? Corny I know but I really like your story and weither it happens my way in the end well I really could care less but I do hope that you update soon. SO lots of insperation to ya and lotsa luck. Well Bye!
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Reviewed By: Kali Ma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 00:14 EDT
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I really loved this chapter. It was hard and raw, but still sweet at the same time.
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 18:17 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: October 01, 2005 04:08 EDT
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Please update real soon. Wonder how long before Kagome and Hiei gets away from that crow.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:37 EDT
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Even before you asked I was going to comment on the lemon. I loved how Kagome wasn't suddenly cured of the torture she has been enduring through the magic of Hiei's cock. That she managed to relax enough for it not to be actively painful is miraculous enough.
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Reviewed By: EnV(notloggedin) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!! its soooo freaking good!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshi-sama (not sighned in) On: September 30, 2005 20:56 EDT
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One of the BEST!!!!!!!!! you are extreamly talented and if i wanst grounded right now and on a time limit i would praise you more!!
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 30, 2005 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ugh, I am so sick right now. My head is pounding and I keep debating whether or I'm hungry, full, or nausious. I can't even spell things right anymore. But all that aside, I loved this chapter, the story keeps getting better with every one. I'll tell you honestly that the lemon was probably the best that the situation allows for. I doubt anyone could pull that off and still have Kagome in the frame of mind as a victim of Masakazu. Well, I'm going to go to sleep now. --rei
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