| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's been a while since I reviewed someone (computer problems) Well let me start by stating that I really enjoyied reading it and that I can't wait to read more chapters. Well take care.
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Sithathoryunet On: August 15, 2005 16:30 EDT
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A master storyteller has done it again. Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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Title: Of The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 14:34 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ~kim~ On: August 12, 2005 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really want to read more soon. i just love the story and can't wait to see what is going to happen. so please update. lots of love and hugs from kim
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Reviewed By: SilverRyu On: August 12, 2005 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to congradulate you.You remain true to your word, and your readers, and unlike most authors you dont't take that long to update. This is a very....I can't think of word to describe it, well anyways hope you keep writing.
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Title: Wowie
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: August 11, 2005 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gone for a week and you get all this up... ;;;thumbs up sign;;; go you ^.^ I can't wait to see what will happen with koga and all. Hmmm... i wonder what changed and what is or was suposed to happen. Well ttfn and keep up the great work... ^_~
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Title: my mermiad haten' chicken says hi... bye
Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: August 10, 2005 21:06 EDT
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WOW! I REALLY LIKE IT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: August 10, 2005 04:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'd say more please but that's being redundant (Quote of last review: Two words: MORE PLEASE!) so instead I'll say this: I frickin' love you. Please update as soon as you can. (Hiei/Kag, Hiei/Kag, Hiei/Kag! *dies*)
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Reviewed By: SilverRyu On: August 09, 2005 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter even though it kind of confused me a little. I guess there are friends in unexpected places for Hiei and Kagome. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: August 08, 2005 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Two words: MORE PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: kiwi93089 ((not signed in)) On: August 07, 2005 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i can't wait to read more please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Tenshi_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write some of the best stories that I have ever read! They're very descriptive and I'm very happy I like anything from horror stories to romance... I really hope you update soon!
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Title: my mermiad haten' chicken says hi... bye
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:23 EDT
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I love this story, please update really soon. ASAP! I really like this chapter. I totally was off, I never thought that that kind of twist would happen. Anymore, because if there are then bring em' on because it just makes the story that much more interesting. Please hurry, Im not o patient of a person, but I am goofy...LOL
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Title: gore
Reviewed By: black tigeress On: August 06, 2005 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can understand how the gore and vivid discrption in your writings can effect the readers, and disturb most of them. But is that not the point in what you are writing. This story depicts a very desperate and sickening scences, and I beleive that if those discriptions were removed then the overall effect of the story would not be so strong. In writing it is some times necessary to depict the horror so your audiance can better understand the characters that take part in it, but I also believe that their could be some warning. The warning does not have to be in the story, it could be at the begging of the chapter so your readers know to prepare themselves for the horror that is to come.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 06, 2005 15:06 EDT
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This is such a good story. What happened to 'you will be mine' Why'd you take it down? Hope you decide to repost it, I really liked it. Hope you update everything soon, and I hope you feel better.
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