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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: NOOOOOOOO -_-,
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: April 26, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo!!!!! it stoped. there was no more. I need it, i crave it. Thats it! you are going to the very top of my list of favs, so you see you must update soon or i shall cry -_-, see You are very talented and i can't wait to read how they get out, what they find out about each other and, the most important part, thier meeting in kags time... OMG, i wonder if inu and shippo will find her comming out of the well and find out what happened... awwwwwww, now i want it even more. PLEEEEEAAASSSEEEEE update really really soon, you have no idea how much i worship your fic. Darks are always the best... ^_~
| Title: NOOOOOOOO -_-,
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: April 26, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo!!!!! it stoped. there was no more. I need it, i crave it. Thats it! you are going to the very top of my list of favs, so you see you must update soon or i shall cry -_-,
| Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY F***ing s**t! I love, no i worship you fic. I love dark fics and i am only on chapter two of yours but it is already turning out to be my fav fic of all... ^_~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 04:24 EDT
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@_@ eh... next chapter 'tis up... read to your heart's content... must.. sleep... *snore* Eh, next chapter's up, and Masakazu hasn't been killed in a week... so I won't bother killing him tonight, as I just want to sleep... hmm... tests... I promise myself, after all the tests are done, I'm going to re-read 'Whispers in the Night... no wait... no I'm mixing up your stories... sleep now! Yes, sleep.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 01:16 EDT
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Eh... Shabopo's review makes far more sense than mine, so I may have had more, but she had more meaningful stuff. Hm... though she does bring up an interesting point, with the heat cycle. I hadn't thought of that, as I was far too focused on thinking of way's to murder Masakazu... speaking of that, here's another way. Stick him in a room full of... cute things! ^-^ He'd go insane soon, and then murder himself. Anyways! The next chapter is up, just figured you'd like to know! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then I started thinking... how long will she be imprisoned? ...long enough for Hiei to go into heat again? I could so see Masakazu getting a sick kick out of confining the two if/when Hiei has little to no control over his physical desires and perhaps actions. For him to be set loose on the one he refuses to hurt. Keh. I've got a twisted mind. Though... Kagome'd understand, I think. If they were together that long, she'd know it wasn't what he wanted to do. I'm eagerly waiting to see what is coming... I'm trying to procrastinate studying, which is bad as finals start monday, but I can't focus and I'm sort of hoping you'll update soonish! ...sort of rambling review, but I believe I left a thorough one on ff.net, so lackage of guilt here. Heh, for killing Masakazu, there's always flaying alive and then burned to death.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[pout] I think rabid outdid me review-wise this chapter. A block on Masakazu killing methods? I vote him being completely dipped in boiling cheese and then getting tied down by a nest of ravenously hungry rat youkai. I just realized how few Hiei/Kagome stories there really are. You'd think that it'd be ravenously popular- I mean he's similar to Sesshoumaru in many characteristics, and the Sess/Kag pairing has the an immense following. My theory? It's the height that puts people off the pairing. ...Thinking of Hiei getting so strong he breaks the manacles gives me warm fuzzies. I keep thinking... if the Reikai Tentai find him right after he found her, they'd try to arrest him. Throw in Shippou and Inu-Yasha, who'd accuse him, as they would be able to smell him on her, a scent that's strong enough they know he's been around her for a long time. ...Kurama might give him a chance to explain; I think Yusuke would, actually- he really respects Hiei. Kuwabara would assume the worst. He's not the idiot most of us pretend he is, but he's quick to jump to conclusions. So if the jewel isn't gone, and her powers are suppressed, where is it? They'd be able to sense it on her or in her. [holds head in confusion] She would need to be healed... but he wouldn't take her to Genkai's, I don't think... would he trust his sister? I'm not sure. Kagome is perhaps the one person who holds and equal- if not greater- claim to his protection.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 23:35 EDT
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I semm to have a particuliar need for a Hiei/Kag pairing and you helped it. Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 01:35 EDT
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Where, oh where, have all your other reviewers gone? Hm... you do know those words, like 'writing slump' and 'writer's block' are contagious? T_T Ah well, I have plenty of other plot ideas anyways! ^-^ Hm... I'll relent on Masakazu for now, he can just spend quality time with Hiei. ^-^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 01:01 EDT
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Geez... how to kill him today? Hm... I know! He is now my shield against angry readers... ^-^ The next chapter's up! Enjoy! I'm in hiding! ^-^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:27 EDT
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Hm... today's death... shall be... *huge pause, and in the expectant silence, Rabid stands up, looking serious as she clears her throat*... actually, I haven't thought about it at all... so, he gets a one day compensation or relief... from me. 'Cause I don't feel like killing him today... *Masakazu sinks to floor in relief, Hiei slaughters him*
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 18:30 EDT
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Yeah, It scares me too. watch out! Hiei on the lose! heehee! I love this story! I went to Florda for a whole week and the only thing I could think of the whole time was how this story was going to turn out. Every night before bed, 'I wonder if she updated yet..' Sorry! I LOVE this story! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 23:13 EDT
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Hm... today's death... give him internal wounds and make him cough up his own blood. That's basically as detailed as I'll get today... ^-^; ah well, 'till next time!
| Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 13:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is killing me when will you let them out and se what will happen to the two when hei finds uot the truth about kagoma i love the story though
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 20:56 EDT
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No! I haven't gotten around to giving you his death for the last few days! T_T Ah well. You'll live. However, Masakazu won't. Not with I, RabidFangirl101 around! ^-^ Today's death shall focus on the... *closes eyes and assumed meditative position* throat. Yes, I've got some vivid fantasies going through my head right now, so I'll share one with you. Okay! He's bound on the floor, unable to move and plastered with wards, the only part of him that doesn't have anything on him is his neck. Everything else is covered in wards... thus he looks like a mummy... :D anyways! You then slit the neck at all non-vital points, and assuming he's a demon thus has a slightly higher pain capacity, you then rip open his throat and begin taking things out, while he's still alive. ^-^ Okay... blame my sudden sadistic turn on exams and such... though I am of the opinion that the scariest way to die would be the homework... and it's possible. 'till next time! ^-^
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