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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 23:21 EST
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I love this story! Please update soon! I was crying when Kagome got taken away! I hope that Hiei and Kagome get to meet again in the future... and not the future that she gets raped in. The future that shes from that Hiei's in now. I don't think I could sit through another rape flash back. Let alone the real thing.
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 28, 2005 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... one thing, you might want to up the rating to at least PG13. I don't feel it's 'R' yet, but it's really not PG with the newest chapter. Just a suggestion... I don't want some younger author to flip and try to get you banned or something.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this chapter was very well-done. It was clear as to what happened... but not grotesquely so. Once again I do appreciate you paring things like this down from time to time. I'm curious to see how old you make Hiei... ~300, if I recall aright... so how did Kagome get to when he was that young? And it would be like her to try to help, I think, even if she were in such a state... though I fear for her going catatonic if things do not improve. ...Iie, I do hope she isn't pregnant... though it still is up in the air I think as to whether or not a miko could bear a demonic child. It's good to know that the moon-puzzle will come clear soon; this set the tone very well for upcoming chapters, I think. Sidenote- I just noticed that FF.net changed their rating system... it's weird. AMA must've threatened to sue, ne? I eagerly await more when you've the time and inspiration. This is so interesting! I plow through hordes of horrible ficlets to find the occasional gem like your stories, or deviation's... they are what makes the genre worth reading, in my book.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:47 EST
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I usually only type at 45 WPM... @_@ ah well. I well enjoy watching Hiei murder his tormentors... in fact, I'll bring the popcorn. Want some? ^-^ This was a depressing chapter... though I am wondering, who exactly was with Hiei? Hm... well, we'll see. I now need to tear myself away from all the fanfics and begin work on the next chapter... I'm hoping it won't be another 'must... get... *thud* ZzZz...' chapters. Though I doubt that will happen... I'll try, I'll try. 'till next time!
| Reviewed By: {*crazy-punk-gurl*} On: March 28, 2005 16:44 EST
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I guess I was wrong about Hiei, I'm happy he didn't hurt Kagome!:-) Poor thing, I would hate to lose my innocence like that, that's the worse way to lose it. Anyway, this is getting really good so far. Hiei is right, Masakazu should die for his twist mind of his. I wouldn't mind killing him myself but I'll need reinforcements from my muses. That would be fun... muwhahahaahaha! Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:36 EST
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great story! I love it so far, keep up the great work and update soon! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 28, 2005 14:51 EST
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Thats sad poor Shippo thats so sad for him and everyone elas well i love it update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:53 EST
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I really like the story...nice plot & character development...I can't wait to see what happens next!!! [=
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 23:06 EST
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I hope your right. I can take on a rape scenes but if it's really bloody, I'll probably skip it and go onto the other stuff in the chapter and I can handle really dark stuff, hope it isn't too depressing for me. And I promise not to flame you!:-D Anyway, when are you going to update 'Will You Be Mine'? I know I'm asking a lot but I'm curious on how your going to finish your other stories, especially with this new one. It must be hard to be you... *gives you a cookie* I envy you! *salutes you* Ja ne until next review from me! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 27, 2005 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, a chapter leaving us all breathless for more. I am always impressed by how well you write. I'm rather curious about the whole moon thing, and where/how Hiei comes in and interacts with Kagome... I guess I'll just wait and see, ne?
| Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i just saw that you started a new fic... ...and it is great! hope you update soon, ;) !
| Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 27, 2005 21:22 EST
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Hey this is a great chapter i love the battle well anyways update it really soon ok thanks tootes. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:25 EST
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*borrows Ryu's idea of feeding character limit to Hiei's dragon* Eh, you'd think it is immortal or something at this rate. Anyways, I was wondering if perhpas somethign would go horribly wrong and have everybody in Kagome's group in a dire situation, then Hiei comes, inexplicably kills Naraku, and lah. Then I realized you've already done this, and now I'm wondering.... How are you going to introduce them? This is going to be eating away at me for a while. At least, until you tell us how they meet. Let's see... I think Kagome has to go through hell first, though that may not be the case as you had Hiei in the first chapter thinking about her, and he said she was 'pure'. Then again, I only know he said something to that effect. So, anyways, perhaps he met her before she was driven through hell and back... or perhaps, he was the one who made her go through it. Much to ponder, much to ponder. 'Tis a real puzzle here! ^-^ I can't wait-actually, I can, but that's only because I have to-to read more. Ah well, 'till next time then! In the meantime, I'm hoping I'll be able to update before Saturday for once.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:18 EST
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^-^ I can't wait to read more of this either. Though I'm curious, how do you do it? You're like the super-writer everyone wants to be like, you are right now, succesfully juggling 2 or 3 stories, and updating constantly. My theories are that you are either a really fast typer, or you happen to be able to type in your sleep. Or you could be some sort of alien that doesn't need food, sustenance, or anything else, thus enabling you too write 24/7. Or I may just be delusional from lack of sleep. Truthfully, the last one is the likeliest. Portraying Hiei correctly... that does sound difficult, bordering on the impossible. But I'm sure you'll be able to do it, somehow! ^-^ I'll like whatever you come up with, as long as it isn't horribly OOC and there are no dancing gnomes. Or those overly cute animals that are able to melt even the toughest of defenses with a single glance. I just realized... I don't think you've really mentioned Yukina at all in your fics. Then again, the whole brother/sister relationship, turning Hiei mushy and melting his defenses is somewhat overdone. Or I'm hallucinating the whole thing... come to think of it, I can't really recall a fic where that happened... eh. Okay, this chapter was... I lost the word. I liked this chapter, or r- Ah! Now I remember what it was I was going to say. I like how you're portraying Kagura! It seems right somehow. I dunno... Hm, so they've killed Naraku, and now what? I was half-suspecting that perhaps something would go horribil | Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 26, 2005 15:35 EST
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Please update real soon. Very interesting start.
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