| "Shattered Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: update
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 15, 2005 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He is going to say yes, right? Am i right? I better be!! Cause if I am not, then you all shall pay. *laughs evily in a very dark corner while planing on how to escape the nut house*
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Reviewed By: yd7evgbehef On: June 12, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make another soon
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Title: i need more
Reviewed By: da1andonlydarkandlovely On: June 12, 2005 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a very good fanfic. I just want to read more of it. so yea i think u need to make it a little longer. im just dying to see inuyash and kagome get together. the way you described them in this story theyrealy do make a good couple and and they could help each other out with their problmes dont u think so hurry up and write the next chapter soon im just dying to read it and make sure u write ALOT OF IT 2.
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Title: longer
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 11, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want it longer!! You're getting closer, just a tiny bit longer. Ok, ok. Oh, good chappie!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 11, 2005 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job. though you might want to be careful with what word you use. accepted should be used in one or two of your sentences. as in "inuyasha isn't really accepted by demons or humans." the word you use, except, is used like "we ate everything except the brussel sprouts." i don't mean to be nit picky but things like that bother me. i look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nva(me lazy) On: June 07, 2005 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's okay that it's short...parents are a pain anyways, it was good...update again soon, till then. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cool that Kagome met Sango, but I'm much more curious about the Inu-Kag realtionship... Will they fall in love with each other? I hope they will.
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 06, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it!!! Wheres my money?! That was so sad yet good at the same time!!! Kagome laughed, found a long lost friend, and is about to go shopping!!! Oh and can you make your chappies longer? Thery're kinda sorta short. I mean I don't like long chappies but I totally hate short chappies. Cya later, update soon !! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Karlee On: June 03, 2005 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was really good so i hope u come up with another few chapters. i know its really hard to write stories because im writing a privet one and im only on the second page. anyways it was truley splended to read
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Title: hey!!!
Reviewed By: kgome182005 On: June 01, 2005 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that it's going to be Sango!!! I just know it!!!! Oh and I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: fdsgfdgfdgfd On: May 31, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you have to write a cliff hanger?
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Title: hewwooooo
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*beams* me am happy, me get to read good chapter, thank you you made a very borededed(yes i made that up) person happy....great chapter, Zirra
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's great! keep up the good work!
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Title: Good Stuff.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the storyline. Though I've seen it before, reversed, it is totally original. I love it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok well it was a filler chapter, but still pretty good. oh not being picky or anything just pointin it out, but this is how you spell Lansing not with a c. :D hey as long as we can read it who cares right. Zirra
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