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Reviewed By: Phe On: August 16, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was absolutely breathtaking. I couldn't stop reading it until 5:00am this morning and I started around 1:00pm. The imagery and emotion within it was astounding. You are an exceptional author. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After five cups of green tea and hours of reading I have to write a short review. First of all, its so unbelievable the poor amount of reviews this story has received on mediaminder. It is very hard to find a good story on among the masses especially one with Rin and Sesshomaru. I just finished chapter six and FREK what a plot twister Rin betraying Sesshomaru fanfreakingtastic.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny, about three seconds before I came on to Mediaminer, I was thinking, "You know, I haven't read a good Sesshomaru/Rin story in so long! *Snort* I dought mediaminer has any good ones..." And then I found this story, and damn, you sure as hell proved me wrong! This was a great fanfic, and I hope to see more of your work in the future. ~Spaz
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Title: Entertaining and Enthralling! ^0^
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 02, 2005 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was, indeed. I'm sad that it's over, but very, very happy at the resolution. I wouldn't have been surprised and might possibly have been satisfied if the ending had been more ambiguous, but in that strange way that readers have when the characters have such depth and are so fully realized, I really wanted Sesshomaru and Rin to be happy. Thank you so much for writing - this was a wonderful story. I look forward to the epilogue with pleasure. Merci!
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Title: I want more please!!!!!!
Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: July 01, 2005 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, love it, love it.....your story was so great. It was funny the meat eating tree!!!(a stroke of genius!!!!!) Having Sesshomaru doing things for her a waiting for approval like a little kid( so endearing!!!) and them being together in the end( always great!!!) I know I will read your story again.....I just enjoy so much.....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until your next Rin/Sesshomaru story.....
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 22:06 CDT
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Each chapter get better and better....I'm so crying realizing how broken Rin body is and how everyone is trying to help her.....please let them be together...I don't think my heart could take it if their not together.....
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is trully one of the best fics ive read, and i have read a few. ive never reviewed before though, you have a real talent, and unfortunately a penchant for killing rin off rin. great asset but bittersweet. while i appreciated it in other stories, i dont think i can bear it in this one! please let them live! together! happy....and stuff...or i might kill you!!!! lol, ill write soon!--Zetta
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: June 21, 2005 06:27 CDT
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A very deep chapter. Why is Sess so afraid? He need to take the bulls by the horns and face his fear.I just enjoy this story and I hope that you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: June 03, 2005 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my gosh, this chapter was really good....I love the way you have him find Rin in her three deaths....that took some skill to write....I can't wait to see how they are going to get out of Hell, and what Rin's final decision will be.....update soon
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: June 03, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chapter was so sad. To see Sess humble himself to the only person that means so much to him. I wonder what Rin final decision will be when she return to the land of the living? Upadate this great story really soon
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Reviewed By: Glitter Rin-chan On: May 13, 2005 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're great. You're literate. You're imaginative. You are a great writer. You've left us at a cliffhanger!! Please update as soon as you are able. =)
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 14:50 CDT
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Okay, I know that I just reviewed your other story just a bit ago, but I got pulled into this one and HAD to leave a review to let you know how far caught up I am in this story and to let you know that you HAVE to continue updating this current one or you are going to have a lot of dissatisfied readers on your tail!! Please oh please, today's my birthday, so could you please update with another chapter?!?! I gotta know what happens when they get to Housenki's!!
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Title: OH NO!!!!
Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: May 08, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU,SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!! See what pride did for you!!!! The last chapter was intense!!!!! I felt Rin's pain....It was just to good....please keep the updating coming when you can.....I so love your story....
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Title: beyond
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I read this chapter 3x! I know that sounds crazy. But it was so moving, so dark, so real that I could actually SEE everything that happy. The last scene where Rin strikes the pearl against Sesshoumaru's breastplate...I was left speechless-I had to stop myself from crying (since I was reading this on the bus home). You should have far, far reviews for this story. It is superb and I am very much looking forward to the next installment. Shouji was an excellent villain. Despicable and effective.
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Title: Superlative Work
Reviewed By: Amie On: May 04, 2005 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have made these characters come alive in an an absolutely unforgettable story. This is quite possibly the finest, most literate fan fiction I have ever read. "Rin could not say, because she was in love." The sequence of those passages was beautiful and very cleverly balanced. Your imagery is fantastic. The last chapter completely felled me - there is not a false note in any character. You must continue. I hope very sincerely that you are writing original works for your own benefit as well...you have a remarkable gift. Thank you.
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