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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 29, 2005 21:06 CDT
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Why he do it hu why...please tell me I wont tell Goku...Grate chapter... Oh I thought Mabye some thing happened between the two...but you said it menrt nothing (sigh) but am I right did they have some thing going and Vegeta got mad at him nearly killing him or was it one of the women fining out Tell Please Update soon.. LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 04:41 CDT
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The fic's progressing nicely! Please don't think I was accusing you of stealing ideas-- not at all-- it's just that the first chapter reminded me of that fic by Kamikaze. Your story so far is already much different from hers.^^
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 18, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well he asked...poor Goku...I think I know what Vegeta and he were arguing about before he ended up in this strange world...please update soon realy hooked...thumbs up to you and your Beta reader!!!! LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: geta_gfan On: April 12, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic .It is great ,I cant wait to read the next chapter.PlEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: LadyKATT
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI WOW...love it!!! I realy like how it is falling together YA you got your Beta reader thumps up to both of you! Please up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an excellent start! I have not been this excited about a continuation fic in ages (it helps that you say it's already finished, so I don't have to worry about an author leaving me hanging). This first chapter is reminiscent of To Win A Royal Heart, an old fic by Kamikaze that I also enjoyed quite a bit. I liked Goku's pained, shocked reactions to realizing he was out of space and out of time-- very realistic. I eagerly await the next update; hope it won't be long. I'm glad Vegeta's Mate volunteered for the job of beta, cause I was seriously thinking of volunteering myself, and I've never betaed before so it would be awkward.^^
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 08, 2005 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow...poor Goku what a fix...hope you find a bata reader soon so you can up-date...please up date as soon as you can Well done so far LadyKATT
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate ~not logged in~ On: April 07, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY FUCKING HELL! That was so awesome! I totally love this fic and I can't wait for you to update. I'd be happy to take on being a beta reader if the job is still open. E-mail is vegetas_mate002@comcast.net ~mumbles as she wanders away, stopping every now and then yelling "Damn that's great!" before resuming her muttering~
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