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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story was fabulous. There was a lot of emotions running high once things got going and others were revealed. I can't believe Goku would make such a wish but it was understandable. I feel sorry for Bejita when he got claimed but it was the Baka's fault. Very nice job. I enjoy your stories emencly.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 13:00 CST
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Wow, that was incredible, captivating, thoroughly entertaining. A great plot, although I must admit it bugged me that Goku just left near the end like that. I know he was upset, but still--where did he go? Did he just end up unconscious from grief somewhere? That's what I imagined, anyway. I loved the exciting beginning, G's relationship with his bro and his bro's mate, all the tension with the "love triangle", the way they kicked the lizards' butts, the scene with Bulma and CC (hehe!) and B with a Saiyan in her lap (or in the Saiyan's lap?). So many things, so many moments of enjoyment--that's why it's so hard to review an entire fic. I really enjoy how you portray G and V's relationshig in this fic and in your others, and also how you add the little details that make the universe live and breathe, like V's bro's little pets. A couple of things G thought just made me giggle, like contacting CC through interdimensional post, and some other stuff he thought about V. Okay, now I'm rambling, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this fic. I hope G/V continue to inspire you for a long time!
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: September 18, 2005 01:01 CDT
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Yay, a happy ending. But I kinda grew attached to the characters and still want to read more about them *cough*sequel*cough*. Gohan and Kamala will make such a cute couple (since it was a bit open-ended, I will let my imagination run with it and assume that they will end up together eventually). Anyway, just wanted to mention that this has been a really well-written and truly enjoyable story, and I can't wait to read anything else you write.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 17, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad Verry sad it over....But very happy Goku and Vegeta will be together um I was wondering sequal? Yes that would be cool Well done!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 16:49 CDT
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for a second i thought everyone was going crazy, but then i got a little farther along and everything made sense. loved it. i can't wait for the finale!
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: September 09, 2005 14:43 CDT
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A very emotional chapter... I thoroughly enjoyed it. I feel bad for everything Goku had to go through, and I'm happy that he and Vegeta seemed to work things out, but sad that Vegeta had to go through all that suffering first. How did you manage to inspire so many conflicting feelings at once? Good job. Now I'm just wondering what Goku will decide to do, stay there or take Vegeta back with him, or is there another option....
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 09, 2005 13:12 CDT
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Wow it got to me in time this time lol I am glad Vegeta did not kill Goku and Listen finaly to what his mate was trying to say....soo they were lovers in the other time/demetion? lol looking forward to next chapters LadyKatt
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Title: LadyKATT
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 12:16 CDT
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Well now where is he? Why would he do this to Vegeta? Sorry took so long to review forgive me? (bows Low) Up date soon sorry again By LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 05:22 CDT
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wooo-hooo!! we have citrus! loved it. i do just want to ask, what's with the memory-flash that Goku has? where did he go? what's going to happen next? i can't wait until you post more!
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: September 03, 2005 15:44 CDT
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Wow, this story is getting really intense and suspenseful. I'm hooked, I want more, it's too short! Now I'll be wondering what happened to Goku until the next time you update.... Great writing, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 03, 2005 12:08 CDT
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No hun not lasy just not get the notice to let me know you have updated I am soo sorry I have nearly caught up This is really in-tence so fare Talk soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Primncess Katreena On: September 03, 2005 11:43 CDT
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Did I fall a sleep? you have alot of new chapter sorry I am reading them now sorry Please for give me...
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Reviewed By: Fredicus On: August 19, 2005 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH I ran out of chapters again! keep writing! I still say this story is amazing, and it's getting better and better, but why the cliff hangers! hey somewhere in there you should put in someone threatening Vegeta after Goku and him have had a fight, Goku could jump in to defend Vegeta and so on, I dunno, jus a random thought, keep posting, I wanna know what happens !!From da grl named Fred!~~
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Title: Wild Melody
Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have really enjoyed your fic. i can't wait for your next update. personally, i don't care who's what or where, i just like the citrus!
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Reviewed By: NINAnEnA On: August 16, 2005 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT great great read purple socks for elise by latinayaoimami
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