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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 22, 2005 11:46 CDT
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Poor Goku, he may not be sane by the time he is alowed to return to his other world...please update soon...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 15, 2005 14:51 CDT
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Ok hanging here...so is Vegeta going to let his gaurd down a bit and have some fun? Is the other in the room still or is Vegeta and Goku alone? Please up-date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 09, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naw don't tell me all it would be no fun that way (winks) poor Goku he is not having good luck there...it sad but I think it is good too maybe when he gose back to his home he will put Mr. Pincy in his place...please up date soon...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Prinsess Katreena On: June 05, 2005 00:40 CDT
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Hi again! Wow you are getting me so hooked on this story. question....dose Goku ever get to go back to his normal life or is he stuck there for awhile? If his is stuck there will he get his Prince? PLease update soon Loved the chapter
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 29, 2005 00:05 CDT
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Oh he got kissed?! Cool...I am never leaving you!!!!! I realy like this fic please keep writing. Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 22, 2005 23:09 CDT
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NO DON'T YOU DARE LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!! What happened? Will Goku find himself home? Please update soon. PS I realy love this fic please keep writing it thanks (Bows down low) LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 07, 2005 10:15 CDT
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Sorry did not mean to confuse you I just thought maybe Vegeta was angree at Goku because he got tired of hiding his feeling to the stoborn prince and Vegeta went into one of his temper fits...poor Goku so many things building in him changing...please up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 29, 2005 21:06 CDT
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Why he do it hu why...please tell me I wont tell Goku...Grate chapter... Oh I thought Mabye some thing happened between the two...but you said it menrt nothing (sigh) but am I right did they have some thing going and Vegeta got mad at him nearly killing him or was it one of the women fining out Tell Please Update soon.. LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 04:41 CDT
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The fic's progressing nicely! Please don't think I was accusing you of stealing ideas-- not at all-- it's just that the first chapter reminded me of that fic by Kamikaze. Your story so far is already much different from hers.^^
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 18, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well he asked...poor Goku...I think I know what Vegeta and he were arguing about before he ended up in this strange world...please update soon realy hooked...thumbs up to you and your Beta reader!!!! LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: geta_gfan On: April 12, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic .It is great ,I cant wait to read the next chapter.PlEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: LadyKATT
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI WOW...love it!!! I realy like how it is falling together YA you got your Beta reader thumps up to both of you! Please up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an excellent start! I have not been this excited about a continuation fic in ages (it helps that you say it's already finished, so I don't have to worry about an author leaving me hanging). This first chapter is reminiscent of To Win A Royal Heart, an old fic by Kamikaze that I also enjoyed quite a bit. I liked Goku's pained, shocked reactions to realizing he was out of space and out of time-- very realistic. I eagerly await the next update; hope it won't be long. I'm glad Vegeta's Mate volunteered for the job of beta, cause I was seriously thinking of volunteering myself, and I've never betaed before so it would be awkward.^^
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 08, 2005 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow...poor Goku what a fix...hope you find a bata reader soon so you can up-date...please up date as soon as you can Well done so far LadyKATT
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate ~not logged in~ On: April 07, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY FUCKING HELL! That was so awesome! I totally love this fic and I can't wait for you to update. I'd be happy to take on being a beta reader if the job is still open. E-mail is vegetas_mate002@comcast.net ~mumbles as she wanders away, stopping every now and then yelling "Damn that's great!" before resuming her muttering~
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