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Reviewed By: Nekoni (logged out) On: August 14, 2005 02:42 CDT
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*just read the latest* OOooooh that was a good chapter! ^_^ the 'lemon... eating' was really good =) I'm so impressed by your writing... Possesive Goku!
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Reviewed By: Nekoni (logged out) On: August 11, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Hi! I just thought I'd drop in and say how brilliant this fic is *heart eyes* Chayron, I don't give a damn who's seme or uke when you're writing it (though I have my preferences) because you do it IN CHARACTER and that's what I love about your fics! I mean, apart from the amazing original plots, original characters, character developement, excellent pace, cute critters and sex =3 I
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Reviewed By: Tweets On: August 03, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been so good! Very well written indeed.... but... you're aiming to make Vegeta uke, aren't you? *pouts* I just have a hard time seeing the badass Vegeta as an uke... so if that's the case in this fic, I'll probably skip the lemon to avoid cringing, but I'll certainly read and enjoy everything else, lol! Great job ^.^
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Reviewed By: Fredicus On: July 28, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I am loving this fic, just found it the other day and Ive been reading it non stop since, one problem, I ran out of chapters! how soon till the next chapter do you think? And how far away is the lemon? *grins* Anyway, Looking forward to the next chapters ~~From the Girl Named Fred!~~
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 16, 2005 08:38 CDT
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Oh boy, now this is going to be good...a talk...poor Goku...update soon
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 10, 2005 20:58 CDT
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(crys) Oh Goku, too late he regrets...now he is trapped in this other world and is in heat...Fun Fun...Up date sooon please
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 04, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a nasty web you weave...so who will he have...KILL THE KING!!! Man I hope Vegeta rips him apart! I have this feeling you are up too sonmething sinaster...na you would not evily plot against Goku...right? Na not you...now against Vegeta ya you would...am I right? Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 28, 2005 09:59 CDT
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Will you stop leaving me Hanging? Ya, I am really doubting Goku is sane anymore. I feel for him though, he caught in-between. I wonder still how he got there but don't want to be told yet, I have soem ideas and want to see if I am right...Bye for now LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 22, 2005 11:46 CDT
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Poor Goku, he may not be sane by the time he is alowed to return to his other world...please update soon...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 15, 2005 14:51 CDT
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Ok hanging here...so is Vegeta going to let his gaurd down a bit and have some fun? Is the other in the room still or is Vegeta and Goku alone? Please up-date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 09, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naw don't tell me all it would be no fun that way (winks) poor Goku he is not having good luck there...it sad but I think it is good too maybe when he gose back to his home he will put Mr. Pincy in his place...please up date soon...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Prinsess Katreena On: June 05, 2005 00:40 CDT
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Hi again! Wow you are getting me so hooked on this story. question....dose Goku ever get to go back to his normal life or is he stuck there for awhile? If his is stuck there will he get his Prince? PLease update soon Loved the chapter
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 29, 2005 00:05 CDT
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Oh he got kissed?! Cool...I am never leaving you!!!!! I realy like this fic please keep writing. Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 22, 2005 23:09 CDT
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NO DON'T YOU DARE LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!! What happened? Will Goku find himself home? Please update soon. PS I realy love this fic please keep writing it thanks (Bows down low) LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 07, 2005 10:15 CDT
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Sorry did not mean to confuse you I just thought maybe Vegeta was angree at Goku because he got tired of hiding his feeling to the stoborn prince and Vegeta went into one of his temper fits...poor Goku so many things building in him changing...please up date soon LadyKATT
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