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Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 05:22 CDT
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wooo-hooo!! we have citrus! loved it. i do just want to ask, what's with the memory-flash that Goku has? where did he go? what's going to happen next? i can't wait until you post more!
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: September 03, 2005 15:44 CDT
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Wow, this story is getting really intense and suspenseful. I'm hooked, I want more, it's too short! Now I'll be wondering what happened to Goku until the next time you update.... Great writing, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 03, 2005 12:08 CDT
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No hun not lasy just not get the notice to let me know you have updated I am soo sorry I have nearly caught up This is really in-tence so fare Talk soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Primncess Katreena On: September 03, 2005 11:43 CDT
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Did I fall a sleep? you have alot of new chapter sorry I am reading them now sorry Please for give me...
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Reviewed By: Fredicus On: August 19, 2005 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH I ran out of chapters again! keep writing! I still say this story is amazing, and it's getting better and better, but why the cliff hangers! hey somewhere in there you should put in someone threatening Vegeta after Goku and him have had a fight, Goku could jump in to defend Vegeta and so on, I dunno, jus a random thought, keep posting, I wanna know what happens !!From da grl named Fred!~~
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Title: Wild Melody
Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have really enjoyed your fic. i can't wait for your next update. personally, i don't care who's what or where, i just like the citrus!
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Reviewed By: NINAnEnA On: August 16, 2005 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT great great read purple socks for elise by latinayaoimami
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Reviewed By: Nekoni (logged out) On: August 14, 2005 02:42 CDT
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*just read the latest* OOooooh that was a good chapter! ^_^ the 'lemon... eating' was really good =) I'm so impressed by your writing... Possesive Goku!
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Reviewed By: Nekoni (logged out) On: August 11, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Hi! I just thought I'd drop in and say how brilliant this fic is *heart eyes* Chayron, I don't give a damn who's seme or uke when you're writing it (though I have my preferences) because you do it IN CHARACTER and that's what I love about your fics! I mean, apart from the amazing original plots, original characters, character developement, excellent pace, cute critters and sex =3 I
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Reviewed By: Tweets On: August 03, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been so good! Very well written indeed.... but... you're aiming to make Vegeta uke, aren't you? *pouts* I just have a hard time seeing the badass Vegeta as an uke... so if that's the case in this fic, I'll probably skip the lemon to avoid cringing, but I'll certainly read and enjoy everything else, lol! Great job ^.^
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Reviewed By: Fredicus On: July 28, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I am loving this fic, just found it the other day and Ive been reading it non stop since, one problem, I ran out of chapters! how soon till the next chapter do you think? And how far away is the lemon? *grins* Anyway, Looking forward to the next chapters ~~From the Girl Named Fred!~~
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 16, 2005 08:38 CDT
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Oh boy, now this is going to be good...a talk...poor Goku...update soon
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 10, 2005 20:58 CDT
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(crys) Oh Goku, too late he regrets...now he is trapped in this other world and is in heat...Fun Fun...Up date sooon please
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 04, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a nasty web you weave...so who will he have...KILL THE KING!!! Man I hope Vegeta rips him apart! I have this feeling you are up too sonmething sinaster...na you would not evily plot against Goku...right? Na not you...now against Vegeta ya you would...am I right? Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 28, 2005 09:59 CDT
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Will you stop leaving me Hanging? Ya, I am really doubting Goku is sane anymore. I feel for him though, he caught in-between. I wonder still how he got there but don't want to be told yet, I have soem ideas and want to see if I am right...Bye for now LadyKATT
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