| "Falling for the Enemy." Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have never thought of reading a K/N fic, ever. But the promise of reading a well written story sucked me in. It, in fact well written. I find myself liking this story very much.Keep up the good work. I'm curious how it will turn out. I'm only up to chapter 3.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:14 CDT
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Congradulations! w00t for you! And wonderful chapter, I'm sure we've all been waiting patiently ^_^. I sure have. Thanks for the chapter, it was great as always!
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Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: ~Kilala81 On: March 25, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting plot. Not a lot of people bring politics into fics or understand much about Japanese history. I have to admit I love listening to InuYasha and Kouga when they're together. I hope you add in some Sango/Miroku plot, even if it's not romantic. Naraku's such a dark fun character to write. More people should try it! lol Hope you find time to update again soon, but hey, I understand more than anyone how easily real life can take over and keep you busy.
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Title: Well done
Reviewed By: Vaudeville [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite well written. Don't listen to that crap about "too much detail." Attention to detail shows affection for what you write. (Or at least some kind of OCD/Pathological Perfectionism.) I really enjoy this fic. Please continue. ....Please.
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Reviewed By: kagomevegas On: March 18, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy love the story the only problem I found is yes you have great details but somtimes a littel over board but other than that you are a very good writer and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you keep going with your exelent plot well got to go Ja Ne KayC
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: AW555 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 21:54 CST
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I loved it! I love all Naraku stories cause he's just so darn shmexy but I really enjoyed this one. Nice plot, it's readable, and it's got lemons. What more could a reader ask for? Can't wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: March 16, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the most interesting and awesome stories i have ever read...great job! i cant wait until you update
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Reviewed By: White Luna (offline) On: March 15, 2006 21:54 CST
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I LOVE your stuff, Kinoko! It's absolutely brilliant!! I adore it! I love the way you protray them-you don't have to change a single thing. It's brilliant, and captivating. :). Keep it up
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Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter.I hope u update soon.Well keep up the great work & catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 02:15 CST
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Oh! And Madoise is a girl who read my "Failure" story and reviewed all the time. She was absolutely lovely. I wonder where she went... Anyway, you're the kind of person I'd like to drag out and get a cup of coffee with and discuss Inuyasha like it had some in-depth reason behind it! ^_^! Haha, it doesn't really, but it's fun to speculate, right?
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 02:12 CST
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Kinoko-chan, why are you sick? That upsets me! Anyway doll, you're writing this absolutely wonderfully! Do it YOUR WAY! I'm enjoying it so much! I can see what you mean about how it's hard making Naraku the main character now, now that I've read your story. I actually came to read it for the specific purpose you mentioned the fact it was Naraku. Sesshomaru is MUCH easier than Naraku! I'm not even going to BEGIN to touch that subject! It scares me. Haha! Update soon lovely, I want to see where this goes.
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Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it.I hope you feel better & continue to keep up the great work.Well gotta go,catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful. It shows how much he is falling for her. Does Kagome know what is happenning to Naraku's humanity? You could have Naraku meet some lords(Sesshoumaru) with Kagome by his side. You could have Kagome :sing, sew, paint, play an instrument, etc. It will probably do for a whole chapter or something.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 16:19 CST
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You should probably have her see kouga or sesshoumaru. or you could have shippo accidently run out on his own and kagome find and take him in again. that would be cute, and force naraku to think about shippo and maybe act like a father figure. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: woopwoop On: September 14, 2005 11:07 CDT
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Yeah, I like it. I wanna see the confrontation between the new Mr and Mrs Naraku and the Inu-tachi!!
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