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"Falling for the Enemy." Reviews/Comments [ 37 ]
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 Title: concrit? i think not
Reviewed By: Sushi-sama  On: April 24, 2007 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
http://community.livejournal.com/truckstop_sushi/15311.html
 Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 17, 2007 13:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thats so sad that your fiance cheated on you. I see why you did write! I would be so out of it for like a year. Anyway, I degress. I really like the new chapter. I had no idea that Misuki went to the past. That's right isn't it? Also the little note on the start of the chapter was very helpful. It made everything so clear! Hope to read the next chapter soon.
 Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2007 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I jave read all of the posted chapters of your stories and I LOVE IT!!! the lemon is great. I feel very sorry for Kagome having to go through all of the hardships with Naraku and Inuyasha. THe whole back and forth b/w times is really confusing but I got the hang of it. Cna't wait for youur next update!!
 Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2006 23:35 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its almost December and January! ^_^ YAY!! I know u'll get it posted soon! ^_^ I have faith!
 Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 02, 2006 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Its been 60 years since Inuyasha died? How could Kagome get pregnate? Wouldn't she be like 80? O_o Its sad that Inu would be so mean to her. Its nice that she at least has Maru.. Loved the chapter. It didn't seem like 20 pages, it would be a page turner if it was on paper though, lol. Keep up the good work. Thanks again for the link. :D
 Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 28, 2006 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job,I hope u update soon.Keep up the great work & catch ya later.
 Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2006 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, at first I didn't understand the flashbacks... and I guess the flashforwards but I do hope however that something good happens to Kagome and soon, if she has a family to take care of it would probably be best for her to go live with naraku, probably... though I'm not sure if that's your plan or not, perhaps sense it's just ones that has Naraku's heart then the other can die to create a bit more into this drama... but it's your fic, not mine... anyways great fic, Ja ne^^
 Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2006 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, so Inuyasha dies and they had 2 kids. The part where Naraku pins Kagome to a rock is the future, correct? I think I understand.. Where is the link to this yahoo group? I would like to see the fan art. :) If you could email the link or simply give a public annoucment, that would be great. I'll be starting school soon as well so I know the feeling. Good luck and don't fall behind on our account. Take your time.
 Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good chapter.
 Title: Falling For The Enemy
Reviewed By: SaggiBabii [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it so far please update it great. who will she fall for thets my ques. great creativity.
 Reviewed By: Nullius in Verba [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 22, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not bad, having read Kilala's fiction I can see the resemblance, however somehow her fiction flows much better. You write well enough, and aside from a few minor spelling errors you're set there. Something is still missing though. I think it might be the balance of lemon/non-lemon- leaning a bit too much on the former and not enough on the latter. Try having longer stretches of plot development (without lemons) between lemons. Just a thought.
 Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI  On: July 11, 2006 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your engagement! I came here on a recommendation from the IYFG. Wow...NarKag...I never thought that it could seem so real! And the way you write it...I'm not exactly pleased with Naraku's current behavior but I guess I'll see where the story goes. Good job! Adding this story to my favourite stories list...update soon! Happy Writing!
 Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2006 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your story and look forward to the next chapter. Congradulations on your engagement! And good luck with summer classes. ^_^
 Reviewed By: tigrlady  On: June 28, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
umm...confused. please continue
 Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2006 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
is......is kagome going to be okay???? Is she and inuyasha ever going to see eachother again? *Cries* DAMN YOU NARAKU!! DAMN YOU!!!
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