| "Falling for the Enemy." Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: White Luna (offline) On: March 15, 2006 21:54 CST
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I LOVE your stuff, Kinoko! It's absolutely brilliant!! I adore it! I love the way you protray them-you don't have to change a single thing. It's brilliant, and captivating. :). Keep it up
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Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter.I hope u update soon.Well keep up the great work & catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 02:15 CST
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Oh! And Madoise is a girl who read my "Failure" story and reviewed all the time. She was absolutely lovely. I wonder where she went... Anyway, you're the kind of person I'd like to drag out and get a cup of coffee with and discuss Inuyasha like it had some in-depth reason behind it! ^_^! Haha, it doesn't really, but it's fun to speculate, right?
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 02:12 CST
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Kinoko-chan, why are you sick? That upsets me! Anyway doll, you're writing this absolutely wonderfully! Do it YOUR WAY! I'm enjoying it so much! I can see what you mean about how it's hard making Naraku the main character now, now that I've read your story. I actually came to read it for the specific purpose you mentioned the fact it was Naraku. Sesshomaru is MUCH easier than Naraku! I'm not even going to BEGIN to touch that subject! It scares me. Haha! Update soon lovely, I want to see where this goes.
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Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it.I hope you feel better & continue to keep up the great work.Well gotta go,catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful. It shows how much he is falling for her. Does Kagome know what is happenning to Naraku's humanity? You could have Naraku meet some lords(Sesshoumaru) with Kagome by his side. You could have Kagome :sing, sew, paint, play an instrument, etc. It will probably do for a whole chapter or something.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 16:19 CST
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You should probably have her see kouga or sesshoumaru. or you could have shippo accidently run out on his own and kagome find and take him in again. that would be cute, and force naraku to think about shippo and maybe act like a father figure. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: woopwoop On: September 14, 2005 11:07 CDT
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Yeah, I like it. I wanna see the confrontation between the new Mr and Mrs Naraku and the Inu-tachi!!
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Title: yo. im back!
Reviewed By: acidburn00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like how you write you story, and i love the sex scene. so im going to be regularily giving you reviews to cheer you on! yay! but i would like to see what's going on when they encounter inu yasha and gang, along with some more sex scenes. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: September 12, 2005 19:00 CDT
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I absolutely adore your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens between the two!
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Title: totally tubular mannn
Reviewed By: acidburn00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i really like this story, keep it up, your added it my favorites. i hope you better than i am at keeping up with your stories! i have writer's block... x_x
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Sesshy Jr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:12 CDT
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OH COME ON WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Inuyasha and the others has to find out, as well as Naraku!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That would be so funny to see his expression!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I would just die to hear it!!!!!!!
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Title: great start!!
Reviewed By: Till_is_god (not logged in) On: September 05, 2005 08:30 CDT
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Hey, this is really interesting so far. I dont normally go for this pairing, but I really like the way you write naraku's character. please keep up the excellent work. PS- thnx for reviewing my story!
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Kilala81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very nice start to the fic, I certainly hope that you'll continue with it. There are definitely not enough Kagome/Naraku pairings and it's also rare to find someone that can write sexual scenes tastefully (as you did here) So please update soon (I know, a bit hypocritical coming from me...sigh) ~Kilala81
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story idea. Love Naraku/Kagome stories. The solo action was great. Really good with the details. Please keep writing…0,0'
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